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Constructive comments, suggestions and crits are welcome and appreciated.
It's Been Real Copyright 2016 by Wes Tibbets
VERSE ONE
Pretty outside, ugly on the inside It was love at first sight I never figured, stopped to consider I wasn't thinking with my mind Run me down and sleep around If that's the way you feel I'll rise again, keep right on kickin' 'Til they bury me in boot hill
CHORUS
The difference between love and lust One's forever and one's a bust It's time for me to cut and run It's been real but it ain't been fun
VERSE TWO
In a minute, I was knee deep in it You had me mesmerized I didn't realize behind those eyes Was the devil in disguise Pick myself up, dust myself off Climb back in the saddle again So long, see ya, wouldn't wanna be ya This is where the nightmare ends
CHORUS
The difference between love and lust One's forever, one's a bust It's time for me to cut and run It's been real but it ain't been fun
BRIDGE
Don't let the door hit ya Where the good Lord split ya There's such a thing as too much
CHORUS
The difference between love and lust One's forever, one's a bust It's time for me to cut and run It's been real but it ain't been fun
TAG
Yeah, it's been real but it ain't been fun
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Very hard hitting Wesley.It's when love and lust meet in the middle that problems arise-so I've found lol. Good well written gritty lyric Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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i'm guessin' she aint the one.That's tellin' her Wesley,a good write.Mike
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Thanks Travis,
I appreciate the kind words. I've been kind of in a rut this past week. This was partially written in my notes. I finished it off and went with it this time around. I hope you had a good weekend. Best wishes!
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Hi Mike,
Thanks for the kind words. Unfortunately for me, none of them have been the right girl. I have a batting average of zero when it comes to women. On the other hand, I do know how to tick one off and tell one off. I'm more than adequate along those lines lol. Hope you are doing well. Best wishes!
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I love this one, Wes. Great expressions. Great rhymes. Good job. Dave
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Thanks Dave,
I hope life is treating you well. I appreciate the kind words. I'm glad you like it. Best wishes!
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Funny how we keep falling in love with people because of the way they look. I plead guilty.
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Don't feel bad Jim. I'm a "looks" guy too. The prettier they are, the crazier they are. It's a deadly combination that gets me every time. Thanks for the comment. Best wishes!
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