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I've been working on this song, and am seeking critiques/feedback of any and all kinds. I was thinking about the season change, as it just recently has gotten a lot darker. https://soundcloud.com/diane-hurst/the-sun-shines-onPlease note-- the lyrics are in the third post in this thread; I forgot to include them when the initial post was made.
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Hey, Dianne...
You are my sunshine, my only sunshine....
That is kinda what it sounded like to me. But I like the UKE in there. I think that's what it is. Please...when you post include your lyrics. And then go and review others. The more you do this, the more they will review you as well...
Mine are: Pop!Pop! Feature My Heart Halley Outcome In A Jar
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Thanks for the reply, differenzmusic! It's a guitar that's on capo 4. Thanks for your instructions; I haven't been here in awhile and forgot.
Here are the lyrics: THE SUN SHINES ON
Verse 1 WE TRAVEL IN CIRCLES AROUND THE SUN THREE HUNDRED SIXTY-FIVE DAYS AND A QUARTER TILL WE’RE BACK TO DAY ONE
AND PART OF THE TIME OUR DAYS ARE VERY LONG ANOTHER PART OF THE TIME OUR DAYS ARE ALMOST GONE
Chorus AND THE SUN SHINES ON, THE SUN SHINES ON, THE SUN SHINES ON AND ON, EVERY MINUTE, EVERY HOUR, EVERY MONTH, EVERY YEAR THE SUN SHINES ON AND ON
Verse 2 NOW WINTER IS HERE WAKING UP IN THE DARK SEEING FROST ON THE WINDOW PUTTING ON SWEATERS AND SCARVES
A HUNDRED EIGHTY-TWO (AND ) DAYS UNTIL THE SUMMER HEAT WE’LL BE SLEEPING IN THE LIGHT NO BLANKETS—JUST A SHEET
To Chorus
Verse 3 AND IN THE SPRING AND IN THE FALL IT’S HALF-WAY LIGHT AND HALF-WAY DARK HALF-WAY COLD AND HALF-WAY HOT WE’RE HALF-WAY CLOSER TO THE BLAZING SUN, WE’RE HALF-WAY NOT
To Chorus
Bridge BLUE SKY, GRAY CLOUDS, WHITE SNOW ON THE GROUND WHITE SKY, GRAY RAIN, WARM SUNSHINE HERE AGAIN
Verse 4 THE SEASONS COME THE SEASONS GO WE’RE TILTED FAR WE’RE TILTED CLOSE
IT’S CHANGE AND CHANGE AND CHANGE AND CHANGE EVERY DAY WE’RE IN A DIFFERENT PLACE IN SPACE
To Chorus
Repeat verse 1
DIANE HURST © 2014
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hey Diane,that was nice!i don't know how you get that high with your vocals.Let it shine!Mike
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Hi Diane. What a refreshing sound. Makes me feel happy. My favourite line: "THREE HUNDRED SIXTY-FIVE DAYS AND A QUARTER"
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