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This is a song I wrote a long while back to honor those who chose to serve this nation. For all you do this songs for you! When I get around to re-doing this I am going to change the line "this praise is for you" to "this song is for you" http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=7915172HOORAH! Todd G. Strachan 2009 V1 From the halls of Montezuma, to the shores of Tripoli, any where they're needed, that is where they'll be. Movin at a moments notice, putting their lives on the line, protect the states, and come back safe, for you I pray each night! Chorus For all you do, this praise is for you! V2 Many don't appreciate the job that you all do, standing between us and our enemies, for the red, white, and blue! Those who disrespect you, ought to be ashamed. They're entitled to their opinions, but they're cowards just the same! For all you do, this praise is for you! Bridge After I pray for you each night, I lay down my head. I'm gonna sleep like a baby, cuz I know that you're there! HOORAH! Insert guitar lead here! Hey, I'm not kiddin! Are you hearin me??? Oh well the chorus is back! For all you do, this praise is for you! May God protect you, and keep you from all harm. May He grant you victory, as He has always done! To the brave men and women....HOORAH! once again. Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines, can't thank you enough my friends! For all you do, this praise is for you!
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Todd,
I'm digging your groove. I would like to see you repeat your "one chorus line" once each time -- almost "Peter Frampton like" if you get my drift, but not a tag like your ending. (I like the tag at the ending) I think that would add a little better separation between the verses etc. Nice song, great concept! I enjoyed it much!
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Todd I couldn't resist my take on your lyric.You might have seen in your news that a serving British soldier was brutally murdered off duty by a Muslim terrorist.The poor guy lived in the city I was born in, so it was doubly sad.Your song brought this home. Travis
V1 Any where they're needed, that is where they'll be. keeping safe their homeland or across the seas Movin at a moments notice, putting their lives on the line, standing by the oppressed,who's freedoms not worth a dime
Chorus For all you do, this praise is for you!
V2 Stand shoulder to shoulder with each brave American through communists threats and the terrorist Taliban Raise high Old Glory the red white, and blue! Those who disrespect our flag, shame on you! T
For all you do, this praise is for you!
Bridge After I pray for you each night, I lay down my head. I'm gonna sleep like a baby, cuz I know that you're there! HOORAH!
Insert guitar lead here! Hey, I'm not kiddin! Are you hearin me??? Oh well the chorus is back!
For all you do, this praise is for you!
May God protect them,,keep them safe in his arms pray the seas that they travel be still and calm To those now serving and our glorious dead all brave men and women,who made it safe to sleep in our beds
To the brave men and women....HOORAH! once again. Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines, can't thank you enough my friends!
Last edited by Travis david; 05/27/13 03:33 PM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Great classic rock sound here Todd! Love the vibe. Song is screaming for a killer guitar solo in there somewhere though. Love the lyrics. Nice job. Such a cool dynamic change for both the chorus and the bridge.
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Todd,
I'm digging your groove. I would like to see you repeat your "one chorus line" once each time -- almost "Peter Frampton like" if you get my drift, but not a tag like your ending. (I like the tag at the ending) I think that would add a little better separation between the verses etc. Nice song, great concept! I enjoyed it much!
steady-eddie. Thanks Eddie, glad you liked it, and thanks for the sug to double the chorus, I think thats gonna work!
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Todd I couldn't resist my take on your lyric.You might have seen in your news that a serving British soldier was brutally murdered off duty by a Muslim terrorist.The poor guy lived in the city I was born in, so it was doubly sad.Your song brought this home. Travis
V1 Any where they're needed, that is where they'll be. keeping safe their homeland or across the seas Movin at a moments notice, putting their lives on the line, standing by the oppressed,who's freedoms not worth a dime
Chorus For all you do, this praise is for you!
V2 Stand shoulder to shoulder with each brave American through communists threats and the terrorist Taliban Raise high Old Glory the red white, and blue! Those who disrespect our flag, shame on you! T
For all you do, this praise is for you!
Bridge After I pray for you each night, I lay down my head. I'm gonna sleep like a baby, cuz I know that you're there! HOORAH!
Insert guitar lead here! Hey, I'm not kiddin! Are you hearin me??? Oh well the chorus is back!
For all you do, this praise is for you!
May God protect them,,keep them safe in his arms pray the seas that they travel be still and calm To those now serving and our glorious dead all brave men and women,who made it safe to sleep in our beds
To the brave men and women....HOORAH! once again. Army, Navy, Air Force, Marines, can't thank you enough my friends! Thank you sooo much Travis! I really like your take on this. Just puttting the uniform on makes you a target Travis. It was a very sad thing that happened to that young man. The world that we live in can be very scary place to be. Todd
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