Kristi, Mike,
what a great feel and rich production. Really good lyric with some great lines too.

the passage of time (walk, run, crawl) at the end seemed like a lyrical drop off after the depth of the rest. Like something more emotionally charged would slam it home. Something about hope, faith, desire, anticiption rather than the speed of tim passing. Animate them.

some whimper some beg
some can't wait to please
you're the one...

for poor example. Anyway I do like it a lot.

Have fun,
John

Whoever said the pen is mightier than the sword never had an editor.