Bradley....You need to work on the recording itself...this song puts out a good vibe to me....I like what you have going on... the melody especially....it has a "grabbing' effect....we need to understand the words better....recording wise...sounds like a lot of reverb.....

When I saw your name Bradley Beach I thought of New Jersey...Is that your real name?....

Anyway....work on it....it could be very good...imho...Bob