Hi Ed
How are you?
Technical twears I will pass on to Mike but having said this is really like the bridge but of course it can be improved on . The lyric on second thought can also be tweaked re. Vics comments but generally the song has been well received mainly due to Mike' part.
Good to know you like it Ed
Thanks again for suggestions
John

We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde