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Good to hear you posting again Mackie. Definitely a lyric many can relate to and your musical style is always enjoyable.
That said, I feel a disconnect with V1. It doesn't relate to the rest of the song, doesn't smoothly lead into the next verse and if you eliminated it completely and started the song with V2, you wouldn't really lose anything of the story.
Just a thought.
Ricki
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