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Dave--
i appreciate your critique--this one is 5 years old, but still hasn't found closure.
I originally had the CH first, but the song was too long--I thought of "hurtin' kind", but it wasn't strong enough.
I know this song has a lot of truth, if I can get it worked out--I'm like many writers, the message is there, it just needs some help to be elevated!
I always listen to the ideas you offer.
Mackie
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