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Hey Travis,
You've got some great ideas! I'm going to be reviewing this later and will return to respond properly.
I realized that the minivan line was short anyway so your replacement would work perfectly there.
Cackling made me cackle, as did "hillbilly code!"
That kissin' cousin line -- you've really got me thinking there! I tried using the term "kissin' cousins" several times while I was writing this, but nothing came out as good as what you have. That being said, I want to somehow keep the kissing sisters in too. Oh, I don't know!
I think that I might also have made those lines confusing because I think I made it sound like the singer is one of the sisters. I should have said something like "and the person" instead of "and the one."
Anyway...I'll be back! THANKS for your help! Lisa
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