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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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listen here http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewartSECRET ROOM
© words by C. Stewart ( March 11, 2010 )
Human decency is dead
That's what my television said
Society can make you cry
Take away your lovely high
PRE-CHORUS
The angels voice is white
A beam of guiding light
But the devils voice is black and on attack
CHORUS....
Makes you want to go to the secret room upstairs
Lock the door and don't let no one in
Escaping from the jagged evil wind
FInd a lonely corner and hide
Monsters on the city streets
Looking for a child to eat
We know it shouldn't be this way
Makes it hard for kids to play
PRE - CHORUS
The angels voice is white
A beam of guiding light
But the devils voice is black and on attack
Makes you want to go to the secret room upstairs
Lock the door and don't let no one in
Escaping but you never really win
FInd a lonely corner and hide
Do you go up there, do you throw up there
Did you grow up there, what do you grow up there
Lubricated smiles
Criss crossed in a pile
Happiness on hold for a while
The angels voice is white
A beam of guiding light
But the devils voice is black and on attack
Makes you want to go to the secret room upstairs x 2listen here http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
Last edited by Calvin; 03/15/10 09:37 AM.
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V1 has made?? can make?? not sure what you were going to do. and that criss crossed in a pile part I dont understand but I do like the idea of whats going on here but I think more about the room might be need or greater imagery/feeling about how the room feels. and it seems like the singer is the one with the room and yet he is asking "do you go up there?" I dont know maybe I am just being retarded but good one Cal keep it coming
Juice
Aaron Johnson
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Calvin,
A little dark and mysterious in the layout--a personal stash--to get you through all the Bad news with a little to spare. How does the garden grow upstairs--ELEVATED MY DEAR WATSON!
Needs some feathering--to complete the idea--
Write on Brother.
Mackie
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Hi Aaron, Thanks a lot for giving this one a few minutes of your time. Well, I kinda like the fact that it's not REAL clear about what MIGHT be happening. I actually saw the SECRET ROOM UPSTAIRS as your mind. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Mackie, Always nice when you pay me a visit, THANKS. I appreciate your thoughts, have a good evening. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Calvin
This is a Powerful write -- it gave me chills and I can't wait to hear what you do musically to this. ; ) jm
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Hi Joice, CHILLS - is a real nice compliment for this one, thank you. Have a good evening. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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