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An attempt at creating a "bar/live show song" that women (of all ages) could have some fun with -- their (straight-talk - oh yeah I know how it works) answer to all the "Mr Rights" who return for more noncommittal fun .

The "why buy the cow" story -- yet trying to say "diamond ring" without joining thousands of songs that have used the word "ring" in their title/hook .

(An economy demo - not anything radio-ready)



[b][size:14pt]A DIAMOND ON[/size][/b] < listen here
©-2006-Don Martin


[verse 1]
are you frustrated baby
well you're not alone
if you're hopin' I'm thinking
it's the thought I've outgrown
our first time around
all I did was stay home
don't want a guy who visits
want a man of my own


[chorus]
momma said they'll find your buttons
wantin' friction for their Johnsons'
seeking any other options you'd give
just lookin' for some action
and a means of satisfaction
'cause Eden's where they think they live

but if you know how they're driven
and their swelling helps submission
it's a chance for you to be the one
sayin' yes won't get it done
'cause momma says it's much more fun
to play with a diamond on
play with a diamond on


[verse 2]
you think this is awkward
well baby so do I
but I don't wanna feel conquered
by another flyby
I can see your need for pleasure
staring at my thighs
so why not say forever
and get your piece of the pie


[chorus] x2
momma said they'll find your buttons
wantin' friction for their Johnsons'
seeking any other options you'd give
just lookin' for some action
and a means of satisfaction
'cause Eden's where they think they live

but if you know how they're driven
and their swelling helps submission
it's a chance for you to be the one
sayin' yes won't get it done
'cause momma says it's much more fun
to play with a diamond on
play with a diamond on


[outro]
sayin' yes won't get it done
'cause momma says it's much more fun
to play with a diamond on
play with a diamond on



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previous song posts -

http://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=505882&page=1#Post505882

http://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=507203&page=1#Post507203

http://www.jpfolks.com/forum/ubbthreads.php?ubb=showflat&Number=509303&page=0#Post509303

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LOL, Don - don't think you have to worry about this not being unique

momma said they'll find your buttons
wantin' friction for their Johnsons'

This line could just become a classic

Thought this was loads of fun - seems like it would do just what you hope. It's kind of "Paradise by the Dashboard Lights" from her point of view.

Now I confess to having a couple of brews at dinner and I didn't get enough sleep last night but I just can't quite wrap my brain around this:

if you're hopin' I'm thinking
it's the thought I've outgrown

but I'll try again tomorrow

Who cares, really? - just had fun listening.....

Scott

Hey Scott

I'll answer the question first

The original (Pre-studio) lines were
"If your hopin' I'm thinking maybe"
"it's the thought I've outgrown"

The flow was the issue that got the "maybe" dropped , and it then became "absent slang" ....... like those words the newspaper has to put in brackets within quotes to advise us what would have been obviously said . Anyways , both people in the theme of this song have one-track minds , so hopefully the listeners will understand what he hopes she's "thinking" about .


The entire office staff where I work is female , and I abuse the hell out of them by providing cds of my demo songs . This is one that they actually sing out loud (in harmony during the chorus) LOL . Their favourite however , is the flip side song to this one , about the player who wants his fun , but (as the title suggests) "THEN YOU GO HOME" . They insist it's non-gender , and they actually sing that one aloud (complete with descriptive body language) LOL .

The songs that the office girls really like , then goes on my songwriter demo cd that I hand out to the local djs' to play in the bars (during band breaks) . Djs just love $5.00 bills , and I like to sit anonomously at the bar and see the patrons reactions to the songs . Occassionally the djs will make an announcement that it's a new song and point me out at the bar as the songwriter -- and then I become a celebrity for a few free drinks LOL . Everyone wants to know someone in the music business - even if they are only one rung up the ladder from themselves LOL .


Anyways , glad you enjoyed it .

Don
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I have to agree with Scott,
momma said they'll find your buttons
wantin' friction for their Johnsons'
is an instant classic.

No nits here at all.

Thanks Dan,

It was a lot of fun to write and work on - glad you enjoyed it .


Don
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