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Is this love that you
offer me tonight
and will it last
long past the hours
that I hold you tight
Most guys enjoy those one night stands
casual romance that holds no demands
but with a girl like you
I've got other plans
if you're thinking that'll be all right.
Chorus-
I'm a romanticist seeking more than just
a brief escape from my lonely blues,
I'd like to stick around a while
sharing the beauty of your smile
if I'm the kind of guy you'd choose....
But if you want a fling just let me know
I'll go and put on my walking shoes,
I've had my share of those,
and it's all right I suppose..
but it feels like we're just getting screwed.
I need some long conversations
on my lonely nights,
before the passion erupts
and sweet bliss ignites,
I want to find the inner you
in more then just one place,
just spending time together
playing kissy face.
I'm not a shallow guy,
my needs demand much more,
than that "Wham, Bam, Thank you Mam!"
then out the door,
I'd rather wake up every morning
knowing you'll be there,
I need a love that goes beyond
some motel room we'll share.
Chorus-
I'm a romanticist seeking more than just
a brief escape from my lonely blues,
I'd like to stick around a while
sharing the beauty of your smile
if I'm the kind of guy you'd choose....
But if you want a fling just let me know
I'll go and put on my walking shoes,
I've had my share of those,
and it's all right I suppose..
but it feels like we're just getting screwed.
ArtWhimsically Yours Studio
MFB III Productions-(c)-2012
Last edited by MFB III; 01/30/12 12:19 PM.
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Hey MFB,
Well, how in the world could she turn this highly romantic offer down? Can you imagine her telling her friends, "I left him because....." LOL!
Lisa
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MFB--
CUPID COULDN'T HAVE PUT IT ANY BETTER--SHOOT THAT ARROW STRAIGHT TO THE HEART--
WRITE ON--
Mackie
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MFB, I like the idea, not common in songs, that a guy would want something more than the "one-night"ers. You've done this with a sweet bit of irony. Does it sing well?
Pam
Never think can't do - think how to
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Hi MFB
Nice to know your not one of thoughs Shallow Al guys lol. unusual sentiments coming from a male's perspective.
Best of luck with it
Travis
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hey Lisa, Mackie, Pamela and Travis, I agree it is a different approach, but even the most macho of guys gets tired of the brevity of love that is temporal. there's always the cold dawn alone again, and the hunt for nights to come to find something more.~~~~MFB III
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looking for love sometimes leaves you the victim but i'm liking this one MFB!
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HiDee Bro Matt...
Nice Thoughtful-Guy Sentiments here...Singer sounds like "A Keeper"...heh!
The "getting screwed" Line felt a tad Blunt...It'd be More Romantic, JMO, if that got Softened-a-Bit by final re-write.
All in All, Sure Does make Singer Look Good--
Good Luck with it, Amigo!
Best Wishes & A Big Guy-Hug,
Stan
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Hello MFBIII
Thanks again for sharing. The angle of this one is great and unique.
Douglas
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hey Michael, Stan And Douglas,Thanks for the comments and suggestions, I will think about changing that line on getting screwed, even though that's what it is in the long run. ~~MFB III
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