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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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"LOVE YA"
So amazing, emotionel breath-taking,
In everything you do.
So beautiful, constantly you unfold,
No matter which path you choose.
& I won't ever be far behind,
with the frames, for all your pictures of life.
So we can sit & (reminisc) comes the time.
OH, baby! I Love ya!
Nothing in this world's gonna make me,
Love ya!
Anymore , more than perfectly.
Love ya!
From my soul too my heart,
Together or apart.
I will Love ya!
Through wind & rain, again & again,
You keep staying strong.
No matter what, you're giving all you've got.
Cause here's where you belong.
& I won't ever be far behind,
with the frames, for all your pictures of life.
So we can sit & (reminisc) comes the time.
OH, baby! I Love ya!
Nothing in this world's gonna make me,
Love ya!
Anymore , more than perfectly.
Love ya!
From my soul too my heart,
Together or apart.
I will Love ya!
OH, baby! I Love ya!
Nothing in this world
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I like it okay. Maybe the chorus could be a little stronger.
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I like this, but I agree maybe it should be longer and the chorus should a more stronger. Overall what a great write.
{Chris McKnight}
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I don't know why, but I read this like a "rap" song! Sounds good! But I do agree to make the chorus stronger.
Good luck with it.
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