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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1221407This is a link for a draft of the music which Alex Oconnor has written and sings. The link has the wrong title on it(Myself Alone) so just click ste- 003 when you get to it. Comments welcome. This Ring. Thanks to shayne for his help. She removes the ring from her finger keeps it in the back of the drawer But can't rub away the mark it made from the many years it's been worn c The ring that hurts her finger lies hidden and unworn The most precious thing I gave to her as a lasting symbol of my true love, v She'll hit the town with her friends at night meet a man whose life she can share But she can't erase all our years together those memories will always be there b I held her wedding ring in my hand then squeezed it tightly in my palm Those who know me understand I still love her and wish her no harm c The ring that hurts her finger lies hidden and unworn The most precious thing I gave to her as a lasting symbol of my true love, ----------------------------------------------------------------- This Ring v She can take the ring off her finger put it away in the drawer But can't rub away the mark that it made from the years it's been there c The ring that hurts her finger lies hidden unworn and forlorn The most precious thing I ever gave her as a lasting symbol of my true love, v She'll go out with her friends at night meet somebody brand new to share But she can't erase all our years together those memories will always be there b I held her wedding ring in my hand then squeezed it tightly in my palm You need to have been there to understand I still love her and wish her no harm c The ring that hurts her finger lies hidden unworn and forlorn The most precious thing I ever gave her as a lasting symbol of my true love,
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Hey Travis, Suggestions below, keep or sweep  She can removes the ring from her finger keeps it away in the back of the drawer But can't rub away the mark that it made from the many years it's been wornc The ring that hurts her finger lies hidden unworn and forlorn<<--poetic yes, conversational noThe most precious thing I ever gave to her as a lasting symbol of my true love, v She'll hit the town with her friends at night meet a man whose life she can share But she can't erase all our years together those memories will always be there b I held her wedding ring in my hand then squeezed it tightly in my palm Those who know me understand I still love her and wish her no harm
“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard
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Thank you shayne for your help with this one.
Travis
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You are welcome
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Shayne's help with this.
The music has been written and performed by Alex OConnor a rough draft of which is available to listen too here.
Travis
Last edited by Travis david; 12/17/11 02:59 PM.
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