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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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Howdy folks,
Got this one done today. I'm looking for any feedback and suggestions for improvement you have. Thanks for your time.
"When Love Hurts You"
Written by Darin Martin (ASCAP) 2011
V1
When no one shares your heavy load
Or walks with you on the broken road
When the darkness pierces the light
And you can't find your way in the night
Pre-Chorus
The sun still shines and the sun still sets
The heart forgives and the heart forgets
Chorus
Even angels cry when love hurts you
It hurts the most when you don't want it to
When you've done all that you can do
Wait out the storm when love hurts you
When your spirit sinks to the floor
And you can't find an open door
When you forget what you're fightin' for
Heaven is waitin' when love hurts you
V2
When you can't figure it all out
Why you're here and what life's all about
When there's no hope left to be found
You can't push back the skies fallin' down
Instrumental Break - Electric Guitar Solo
Bridge
Sometimes the only way to know love
Is to experience what love is not
When you receive more than enough
Give back all of the love you've got
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Darin
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A bundle of influences obviously gathered within when that was written. Often trying to create something is a constructive method of solving boredom. Often that is when I do my most thoughtful writing. It's no good when in a hurry although I have done that too. Would enjoy hearing this one performed once music is added.
Peace,
Brian
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