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by bennash - 06/07/26 09:34 PM
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I always told you I would change
I wasn't the guy that I became
But I never believed you'd leave
That's how naive I could be
Chorus:
I'm not waving the white flag yet
When you're the love of a lifetime I can't forget
I'm praying on stars I see above
And I'm not giving up on your love
Jealousy destroyed what we once had
I was out of line when I got mad
I thought the worst without just cause
I can't believe what a fool I was
repeat chorus
Now I know what I have lost
And I'll get you back at any cost
Words can't prove how I've changed now
Give me one more chance to show you how
repeat chorus
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Hey Jim, I really like the simplicity of this lyric and the message. No nits from me.
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Good Job...Jim... ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif) Agree with Judy. Kaley...
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Judy, Kaley...thanks a bunch. No nits..I feel kinda strange now!
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Hi Jim I like when I read the songs people post and I really relate to them. I think this is really good the simplicity says alot. But I will try to give a nit or two Last verse line 2 I dont think fits,( I dont know how to say why I dont think it does) so i will just say in reality she decides if he gets her back..so see if you think something like "and ill prove it to you at any cost" will work instead. also in the chorus see if you like "wishing" instead of "praying" great song jmo Keith
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Thanks Keith. I like the suggestion about changing the line to "prove it to you at any cost". You're probably right about "wishing" too, as most people wish on stars instead of pray...I think. Thanks again.
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