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This one I said if it's going to treat my second verse as a bridge, im gonna go right to the bridge and spare my self the annoyance

Then i realized I think I rushed to finish the story and didn't write a good closing.

So I left it in the air which i kinda like.

I think what's here works well

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Haulin ass from Pittsburgh
stormy night scene
hydroplaning cargo
out on highway 15

Gimme Three Steps
playin on the radio
never saw her comin
but I saw them tires blow

And I had dreams of bein hero
to that damsel in distress
voice on the short wave said
she had a Gettysburg address

[bridge]
Ya see, I grew up in Gettysburg
it was quite the coincidence
population of 7,000
The Gods were makin sense

yeah, I had dreams of bein hero
to that damsel in distress
wondered if I'd see her again
at her Gettysburg address

Great job man , i love this, If I had any faith on pitching songs anymore , that be good one for a Americana artist
You could spend a few weeks on Spotify contacting artists and study music contracts , See if you could get them to cut it

Yes that was great. Good ending too...sad. reflective...nice.
Bill

Thanks guys, still trying to figure out where I stand in this as an art form

Very least I know I'm the lyricist of these songs, but I'm also a singer songwriter.

A bit strange

Fdem,
in one of my previous song posts you wrote: "You just have to ask what part are you playing in the song? Seems like all that u can claim is the song." In that specific song I recorded everything myself. All I did was replace my vocals with AI vocals. AI was a tool I used to improve the quality of my recording.
I like your song. It's good. But like you wrote here, you have to figure out what role you're playing. Without AI you would only have your lyrics. Your lines are very well-written but without the AI tool the song wouldn't exist. I agree with you that it's a tough question. I'm not sure where people draw the line between lyricist, composer, songwriter and singer songwriter these days.

Take care
Robert

Lol. I know my role, I'm a singer songwriter. Im experimenting with this, and all I can do is enter my lyrics

I only knew about it cause Mike z brought it to our attention

I know one thing, if I wasn't a singer songwriter my results with this wouldn't be this good. I've heard some terrible [naughty word removed].

I'm capable of doing everything myself. Getting a radio ready recording may be a problem

I don't know how long your going to keep trying to discredit me

I'm not going to go into your thread and give you the fight you want.

See ya