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Great Wall of China Started with A Single Stone
The Pyramids..OOO..The Same Way Too: (Know you were going for an inner rhyme, but you've got [color:#FF0000]same and too.Too is not needed, except for the rhyme. You can leave it off and the line still makes sense. I tend to avoid inner rhymes because they sometimes bring more attention to themselves than improve the storyline.[/color])



“I usually start with a title or maybe a little rhyme or phrase.” - Harlan Howard

Co-writing = Compromise!