Hey y'all, thanks for the feedback!

Sweet child of Thursday
She dances like the wind
Her wildfire eyes
Sing a wanderer's hymn
She's quiet as Sunday
But sure as sin
Goes wherever
The adventure is

She toes the line
Only every other day
The townsfolk
Have been known to say
That little girl
She's got her ways
That's just like
Madeline May

On the edge of town
Is a lonely pioneer
He lives for rock and roll
And that's all she needs to hear
She's too young to drink
So she makes him a habit
His ring don't fit
But she gladly wears it

She toes the line
Only every other day
The townsfolk
Have been known to say
That little girl
She's got her ways
That's just like
Madeline May

Madeline May, born in '48
Ran with her love to the interstate
He told her all about a promised land
So she followed the devil, yeah, she took his hand

The townsfolk only know
That she ran away
Did she cross a line
Did she give her soul away
The boy who took her
No, they never knew his name
But they found the ring
That was Madeline May's



What I've got so far, let me know what you think I still need to improve! smile

You are the light of the world. A city on a hill cannot be hidden.

17 year old country singer/songwriter from the Deep South... of England. I love most everything.

http://www.lexrose.com
http://www.facebook.com/LexRosenthal
http://www.reverbnation.com/lexrose