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Route 23
by Fdemetrio - 05/11/24 10:36 AM
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Hey Kim,
Good comments from the others. I see a title that doesn't answer the question but in just a few lyric lines:
What is it like?
We’re connected when we’re with the right one
If fascinated when they say our name
We are re-born under an archaic sun (too poetic)
Pre-chorus
When we first taste that “take our breath away” kiss
No price can be put on something like this (weak follow-up line, IMO)
Got to swim deep waters ‘til we find love
Our hearts will guide the way if we listen
Bridge
it forever grows
Thanks...This is something I need to pay attention to..I appreciate you pointing that out Kim
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
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