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Route 23
by Fdemetrio - 05/11/24 10:36 AM
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hi, i like it and i really like the chorus alot, it pops just fine to me. a dynamic singer( clue-less about pink) would imo make this a hit. i like the melody. i think it's a good song/effort. the lyrics all worked for me except the line,"love waxes and wanes". i would use "comes and goes" because there is one less syllable and i think sings better. otherwise, like i said, i like it.
cheers, dmk
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