Monday 26th...I've now revised the vocals! Hope this is now fine. Thanks all for helping!!!

Thanks for the input guys...sound cancer now removed! LOL!

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Hi friends ... just wrote this one with a friend, Joe Fielding. Hope you like it. Critique away please!

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Plains of Hope
© Joe Fielding and Stan Loh 04-12-10
Verse 1 - Capo – 2nd Fret
The days are slow,
The nights are fast,
Outlook on life,
Is overcast.
If we’re the makers,
Let’s use our brains,
If we can do anything,
We could build plains …

Chorus
The Plains of Hope …
Plains where the dying,
Plains where the sick,
Plains of no crying,
Where there’s no hell,
No evil, no pain, no chains …

Verse 2
If we could take back time,
Fix what we broke,
Our skies will unwind,
The lies we spoke.
No one must give up.
No one say “never”.
In our quest for justice,
In our quest for hope …

Chorus
The Plains of Hope …
Plains where the dying,
Plains where the sick,
Plains of no crying,
Where there’s no hell,
No evil, no pain, no chains …
Bridge
For the sake of our children,
For the sake of the trees, bees, and geese,
For the sake of the poor people looking for peace …

Chorus
Build Plains of Hope …
Plains where the dying,
Plains where the sick,
Plains of no crying,
Where there’s no hell,
No evil, no pain, no chains …
Repeat Chorus

Last edited by Stan Loh; 04/26/10 11:02 PM.
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