Hi Gus,

This is an awesome instrumental. I really can't hear lyrics over it, there's already so much going on. It's not what I would consider background or accompaniment music. I'd write some music to go with the feel of your lyrics and leave this alone.
Not sure about panthers in Spain, but I don't think there are savannas either. smile

P.S. You mention HER wounded prey, and then rhythm of HIS breathing. Is this a hunting pair?

Ricki