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Guess I go first. So much I love. The lyrics, the music, Mike's passionate and great vocals. This is so different and refreshing and enjoyable all the way around. I think you could do away with the 3rd verse ("take in a movie..)since after the first Chorus you only have 2 verses and it would be more consistent, also that verse is your weakest lyrically. Only having the two verses before the first Chorus gets you to your Chorus quicker which you want. OR just have a two line lift there like: bring you home baby, do something crazy... (I replaced "safely" with "baby" since I didn't think "safely" fit). So it would look like this: Run Away When I think of you I think of me All the surprises All the sunrises A friend for me A friend for you Late night lovin’ Or doing nothin’ Bring you home baby, do something crazy... There is a place I can always run away to When I’m alone and missing you I watch the waves gently roll in with the tide Like a blanket unfolding, they open wide And there you are holding me As the water surrounds our feet wrapped in love's caress At the water’s edge Oh...run away, run away Drive along the beach Go ahead drive me wild The moon is on our side Going for the ride Walk along the pier Walk and talk all night Hold my hand, caress it Take our love, express it There is a place I can always run away to When I’m alone and missing you I watch the waves gently roll in with the tide Like a blanket unfolding, they open wide And there you are holding me As the water surrounds our feet wrapped in love's caress At the water’s edge Oh...run away, run away As the seagulls take their dives and the water tumbles free I’ll see you again soon, where our love came to be There is a place I can always run away to When I’m alone and missing you I watch the waves gently roll in with the tide Like a blanket unfolding, they open wide And there you are holding me As the water surrounds our feet wrapped in love's caress At the water’s edge Oh...run away, run away Run away, run away Drive along the beach Go ahead drive me wild The moon is on our side Best to both of you, Lynn Hey Mike I hope you find one of my lyrics interesting enough to "musicate" someday 
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