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I just can't regret or wish I wasn't here I've chosen every path along my road Maybe I just deserve to live without a tear Golden light in the sky, so very dark below (suggest a change in this line as below:)
Hi, Snake, I haven't been around for a while. But I appreciate your very flattering comments on a bridge I originally wrote for Things I Left Behind. At any rate, I overall like this; and I think we can sometimes go into overkill on trying to analyze meaning. For me it is more important that each line directly follow the thought before it and lead into the thought after it
I love this particular section. But the last line doesn't work for me; maybe something like.... "A Vagabond Son,in search of his Soul"
"Live as though you were going to die tomorrow; learn as though you will live forever." Ghandi
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