Hi Mary Lou,

There's something very elegant and crafty about this. There's country cliches in here but they don't seem to hinder the read, I didn't wince once.

Here's another classic, timeless looking/feeling/sounding lyric that will age well. It's void of much todays "look-how-clever-I-am" wordplay and relies mostly on honesty of emotion and speaking transparently to make its statement.

My head tune was an amalgamation of early Rosanne Cash...her attitude and delivery seemed appropriate on this one.

Nice work!
MIke

Last edited by closemike; 06/18/07 03:04 PM.

Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice
Fortune depends on the tone of your voice

-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon)
from the song "Songs of Love"
from the album "Casanova" (1996)