Joe, I tell ya, that signature of yours has been running thru my brain all day.. If I could come up with one line like that.. then I log on and see your very useful critique. appreciate that.. some very good ideas for sure.. this song has had 2 different bridges, that both turned into songs of their own. A biblical phrase might work great.. I'm definately gonna keep trying with your suggestions. also need to say something different on the 2nd line of the chorus I think. I tuned the guitar down to A# I think. smile

Hey Jake, yep sometimes it takes me forever smile

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