Hey Vikki:

I understand your concern. I can't think of any songs that share this structure. And if you did have a second verse and chorus, it would likely end up too long.

I don't know how much people who are evaluating songs for possible use pay attention to that kind of thing. If you hadn't have primed me to think about it, there is a good chance I wouldn't have commented on it. For me, it worked just fine, probably for the reason Dayson gave.

Love your vocal. If you have concerns about it, they are at a level of subtlety that I can't hear smile

Beautiful.....sorry I can't be more help......

Scott