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<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by Emily Sanders:
HI, MIchael,

Nice lyric...I have one little comment:

"Your all I ever need, please tell me you will stay" should read " YOU'RE all I ever need..." if you are trying to say "you are" with "your."

Emily
you are so right...that is how it should have been written. I drive truck and after driving and writing...with only 4 hrs of sleep....hard to make sure.
Thanks for pointing that out.

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