Hi Jeanette,

Well push my buttons!

While I sat there by the riverside
Realizin' what he'd said
I cast all my tears downstream
As the sun turned slowly red. . .

I think that you'll have to make the chorus words your dad's words if the second verse is to follow the chorus. . .

or alternatively try this:
Verse 1, then Refrain (as a 1st chorus)
Verse 2 (but changing the last line to suit)
THEN the MAIN , as in 2ND chorus after (as YOUR words) but with no 2nd Refrain following.
Add the second Refrain to the existing bridge!! (they will work togeather)
Finally the end refrain. . .
Or 1st Chorus repeat and end Refrain.


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Terry C. Graham

[This message has been edited by Tall_Terry (edited 09-10-2002).]