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Hi Jeanette,
Well push my buttons!
While I sat there by the riverside Realizin' what he'd said I cast all my tears downstream As the sun turned slowly red. . .
I think that you'll have to make the chorus words your dad's words if the second verse is to follow the chorus. . .
or alternatively try this: Verse 1, then Refrain (as a 1st chorus) Verse 2 (but changing the last line to suit) THEN the MAIN , as in 2ND chorus after (as YOUR words) but with no 2nd Refrain following. Add the second Refrain to the existing bridge!! (they will work togeather) Finally the end refrain. . . Or 1st Chorus repeat and end Refrain.
------------------ Terry C. Graham
[This message has been edited by Tall_Terry (edited 09-10-2002).]
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