Hi, John. Well, you already know that I like "Too Little Time" - a lot! I think it's the strongest of the three.

I think "Laser In Space" is stronger and more interesting than "All Over Again". I'm not really that hot on the "Laser In Space" lyric, but the music's very interesting and it gets me going. I really like the "stutter" hook in the chord progression on "3-and" of every other bar in the verse and intro. Really interesting and very distinctive. I'd know this song after 2 bars of intro - which is an excellent thing, in my opinion. The fact that you pick it up again at the end of the chorus is just clever and polished-sounding, at least to me.

Not much technical or detailed feedback, but hope that helps somehow.

- James


[This message has been edited by JamesM (edited 06-02-2005).]

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