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by Fdemetrio - 04/20/24 03:22 PM
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Hey guys, I really enjoyed this tune! Well written and performance was really good too. I especially like the vibe as it "holds" you in the song.
I have no nits, but one sug for possible consideration with the musical arrangement. Given the dominant musical tracks--I think you could start the song with the music a bit further back in the mix and having it more gradually become pronounced giving the song more "build." Maybe experiment with reverbs and slight reduction of volume with music early in mix to achieve that (if desired or that is appealing for you).
Great job both lyrics and music& arrangements!
steady-eddie
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