The present title fits the story line, pretty depressing story too,. Which i think needs at least some hope of a better existance than a hand out and bed for a night or two.
It's a long story so perhaps it might come at the end deleting the final four lines?
Best of luck with finishing it Gavin
Regards
John
Something a bit cheerful!

Oh, my friend, we KNOW where THIS COULD end
NOW SO GLAD YOU CARE LIKE YOU DO.
BELIEVE ME I WON'T LET YOU DOWN
WE GO BACK A LONG WAY,ME AND YOU
TODAY'S THE FIRST DAY OF THE REST OF MY LIFE( yeah old hat this line)
ETC




Last edited by Travis david; 07/18/19 05:44 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde