Thanks for the feedback, Ricki. Much appreciated. Yes, it's obviously way too long for radio, but then there are plenty of other reasons why it wouldn't get played on the radio smile

I agree it would be a good live performance piece. I have a few like that. The irony is that I would be a useless live performer.

I did originally want to put the chorus after verse 2, but verse 2 kind of runs into verse 3 story-wise and I felt the chorus would get in the way at that point. Also, there is a short spoken part between those verses, which breaks them up nicely..

Thanks again for listening and commenting.