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Hey Neil,
Sorry about your cold first off... But actually what caught me off guard moreso was the upbeat tempo of the music. It seemed more of a gloom and doom type lyric, so I wasn't entirely sure the music "matched"... Maybe something a bit more urgent?
That said, I thought the lyric was very compelling. The hook is great, you have some terrific lines, such as:
The top few rise higher
The rest sink in the mire
and
The working poor are kept in debt
Its full weight sits on their chest
...and I liked your loose rhymes.
Nice work!! Thanks for sharing....
Beth Beth thanks for your kind remarks re the lyrics. I will rethink the music.
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