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This is a new tune that I am working on. Last November, I spent a hard night of the soul in a hospital room rolling over everything I've ever done wrong in my life. I had no intention of writing about it but I heard that Dylan Klebold's mother (one of the Columbine shooters) wrote a book. I can't imagine the courage that took. I guess she inspired me. I messed up a little in one section and I am trying to consider some slight tweaks to the melody. This is in D modal tuning so I'm out of my league already trying to figure that out. Thoughts on that in particular would be awesome. Thanks for listening. http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=13322189Night is unkind In this hospital room This damn chair It hurts my back Your IV gets tangled With your breathing tube And it beeps Every time you thrash Outside the room There's a security guard And the nurses They look away I ain't got no change For the vending machine That's okay I can't eat anyway Not every mother's son is a killer Not every father's daughter is adored He could have been a writer Or a builder He could have been someone else's But he's yours.. On the news tonight A million voices They're all saying What you are But all I can see Is my baby and me Reading books About dinosaurs Not every mother's son is a killer Not every father's daughter is adored He could have been a writer Or a builder He could have been someone else's but he's yours He was yours
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