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Hi Lane.
I think you have a very cool production and unique song. This certainly is a beautiful tribute for sure. As a lay listener not knowing the circumstances of how/why she left us, I might like to have more story--vs. 3 IMO needs those first two lines to shed more info rather than be more "kind words." I love the last line of that 3rd vs. but would like those first two lines to be maybe more contrasting to evoke the drama. Just a thought, and no big deal, keep or sweep.
Nice job all involved here!
steady-eddie. Thank you eddie for commenting, I always take the suggestions and put them up with the original write as a refferance. I can extend the write in the future, and it all helps it I do. Thanks again for stopping, Mike was so impressive with this song. Lane
"Blessed are the words of truth and fiction,
one might save you from the other...Vincent
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