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Hi Neil, I like this one also. Short, to the point, and well written. You know I'm gonna fuss about the same word rhyme in your chorus. I've of the mindset that a better word can always be found, lol. I wish I had it for ya!  I like your bridge but had a thought for that last line. I don't know, see what you think. KOS. David B~ During my selfish years I learned one thing Nobody but you can do your bidding. When lay-offs come and jobs are rare Don't let that fool be you, you're kidding
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