finleysound can I ask you a pro question about my mix and Mastering on my song? is it OK? I see on your site you do mastering job, I just wonder if my is OK
You are pretty close. Here are a couple of suggestions.
1) The bass needs to come down, at least a couple of dB. It is overpowering.
2) The main melody played by the electric piano (?) is uneven in volume. In places it is too loud, in other not loud enough. Inserting a compressor would help this. It also distorts in a couple of places which is a drag. This might take re-recording the part, or maybe you are just overloading the channel when mixing.
3) The whole mix could be a tad brighter. This is usually best addressed at the individual track level and a few EQ tweaks would be all that is needed. Just find the sweet spot for each instrument and boost those frequencies a little bit to brighten things up.
4) For your genre, I think the overall level is fine. You could compress a dB or two on the master buss to help meld the track together and make it sound more cohesive. Add a little limiting if you want the track to sound louder - but not too much!
I hope that helps. If you need more detailed explanations let me know.