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Posted By: Bill Draper

Destined For Freedom - 07/30/21 11:38 PM

The songwriting circle topic for this Monday is Freedom. Here goes:

Destined For Freedom

V1
Well I'm running
Up the hillside
In the light of
An August moon
There's a shadow
On that hillside
And In my head
An olden tune

Chorus
Will I am
Will I am
Destined for freedom

V2
Well I'm rolling
Down the hillside
In a slide of
Seaside sand
There's a boat
And I am rowing
Away , away
To safe haven

Chorus
Will I am
Will I am
Destined for freedom

Bridge
The bull that blow the horn
I know he knew my mom
He didn't move a muscle until morn
By then I was long gone

Chorus
Will I am
Will I am
Destined for freedom
Posted By: JAPOV

Re: Destined For Freedom - 07/31/21 06:22 PM

This one's way over my head lol...

"Will I am..."?

"The bull that blow the horn
I know he knew my mom
He didn't move a muscle until morn
By then I was long gone...?"
Posted By: Bill Draper

Re: Destined For Freedom - 07/31/21 07:54 PM

ahhhhh......ok thanks. I thought it was obvious....but too opaque. opaque and simple- bad combo!

Will I am is a little...silly.
and...the bridge needs more information to wake up the verses...maybe.

Thanks!
Posted By: Bill Draper

Re: Destined For Freedom - 07/31/21 09:25 PM

Heading for Freedom
V1
Running frightened
Up the hillside
Too much light from
An August moon
Finding shadow
On that hillside
Keep my head low
Don't want to swoon

Chorus
Well I am
While I can
Heading for freedom


V2
I'm top and flying
Down the out side
In a roll of
Seaside sand
There's a boat
And I am rowing
Away , away
To a better land

Chorus
Well I am
While I can
Heading for freedom

Bridge
The hack that blows the horn
In that prison in the valley
Is a favorite cousin to my mom
And promised silence until morning

Chorus
Well I am
While I can
Heading for freedom

Tag
Broken chains
Discarded reins
Destination, Freedom!
Posted By: JAPOV

Re: Destined For Freedom - 08/01/21 04:45 AM

Lol... Much Better!

Even an idiot like me can get it smile
Posted By: JAPOV

Re: Destined For Freedom - 08/01/21 05:00 AM

Broken chains
Discarded reins
Destination, Freedom wink
Posted By: Bill Draper

Re: Destined For Freedom - 08/01/21 05:39 AM

Originally Posted by JAPOV
Lol... Much Better!

Even an idiot like me can get it smile


No no...objective eyes all good.
I did a rough sing of it here:

https://soundcloud.com/wbdraper/destination-freedomwav-1

I'll add your lines, do 400 more takes and smooth it out later.

Posted By: JAPOV

Re: Destined For Freedom - 08/01/21 07:53 PM

I just messed around with this a little in drop-D lol, you should try it! smile
Posted By: Bill Draper

Re: Destined For Freedom - 08/03/21 03:55 AM

I'll try it.

I've been trying to tame open G, AND a slide on my baby finger. I put the slide away...too crash thunk screech etc.

I picked up two chords in this open G tuning from a youtube video. I like the 'rake' technique and am trying that out in the verses now. Fun!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LgjFJnfsdWI
Posted By: Travis david

Re: Destined For Freedom - 08/19/21 02:28 PM

Hi Bill
Yes I stumbled over Well I am too.
A couple of good ideas from JAPOV
All the best
Travis
Posted By: Bill Draper

Re: Destined For Freedom - 08/20/21 05:49 PM

Originally Posted by Travis david
Hi Bill
Yes I stumbled over Well I am too.
A couple of good ideas from JAPOV
All the best
Travis

Thanks Travis. I'll try Japov's line suggest as chorus, and discard Well I am, for starts.
Bill
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