This Must Be A Hurricane

This Must Be A Hurricane #987751 12/13/12 01:11 AM
Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 47 J johnlobello OP Serious Contributor
OP johnlobello Serious Contributor J Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 47	I Appreciate you listening. It's a very raw recording and you can hear my foot kicking here and there but I'm looking for feedback on the idea not the recording. Thanks This Must Be A Hurricane http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=12047064 Things got out of hand She left with our baby girl I don't know where things went wrong And tore apart our world This must be a hurricane Everything is crumbling Water runnin down my face Like there's a poundin rain This must be a hurricane I wanna try and fix things up But I don't know where to start I don't know of any tools To fix bruised and battered hearts This must be a hurricane Everything is crumbling Water runnin down my face Like it's a poundin rain This must be a hurricane In all this debris I'm gettin on my knees God help us fix All these busted dreams This must be a hurricane Everything is crumbling Water runnin down my face Like it's a poundin rain This must be a hurricane This must be a hurricane Copyright 2012 John Lobello

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane johnlobello #987753 12/13/12 01:16 AM
Joined: May 2001 Posts: 5,581 Hickory, North Carolina USA Little_stevie_b Top 50 Poster
Little_stevie_b Top 50 Poster Joined: May 2001 Posts: 5,581 Hickory, North Carolina USA	Nice song, John. The foot kicking sounds like a kick drum and isn't that much out of place, lol. Sometimes a mistake can make for a good idea for future reference. Stevie I'm the only person here who is not unique.

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane johnlobello #987760 12/13/12 01:28 AM
Joined: Sep 2009 Posts: 9,003 Likes: 1 NASHVILLE, TN Mackie H. Top 20 Poster
Mackie H. Top 20 Poster Joined: Sep 2009 Posts: 9,003 Likes: 1 NASHVILLE, TN	JOHN-- I LIKE THE MELODY-- COULD HAVE A WALK-UP SHIFTING GEARS INTO THE CH-- A COUPLE OF LINES ARE LONG, BUT THAT CAN BE FIXED EASILY-- GOOD LUCK WITH THIS SONG! WRITE ON-- Mackie SOME OF MY SONGS http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1003914&content=music

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane Mackie H. #987789 12/13/12 05:47 AM
Joined: Sep 2012 Posts: 551 Indianapolis, IN Taggy Lee (D) Top 500 Poster
Taggy Lee (D) Top 500 Poster Joined: Sep 2012 Posts: 551 Indianapolis, IN	Sounds more like a glacier. I think the idea is sound. It has worked before. An ego under its own power travels assback. ~ Smarticus

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane Taggy Lee (D) #988098 12/14/12 09:55 PM
Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 47 J johnlobello OP Serious Contributor
OP johnlobello Serious Contributor J Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 47	Thanks for listening guys. Well Stevie, I just moved recently and the floor in my area to record was on concrete and now it's wood. I'm movin my stuff into the cellar soon. My foot is always going. I Appreciate the listen and feedback Mackie. Hey Taggy! ...A glacier?

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane johnlobello #988144 12/15/12 04:04 AM
Joined: Sep 2012 Posts: 551 Indianapolis, IN Taggy Lee (D) Top 500 Poster
Taggy Lee (D) Top 500 Poster Joined: Sep 2012 Posts: 551 Indianapolis, IN	It's mighty slow. An ego under its own power travels assback. ~ Smarticus

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane Taggy Lee (D) #988159 12/15/12 05:27 AM
Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 154 Lydia Serious Contributor
Lydia Serious Contributor Joined: Aug 2011 Posts: 154	This is a sweet tune. Great lyrics and good flow. Keep it up! Even so, it is well with my soul

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane Lydia #988188 12/15/12 12:53 PM
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OP johnlobello Serious Contributor J Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 47	Oh...yeah it is a slow one Taggey. Thanks for listening Lydia.

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane johnlobello #988198 12/15/12 01:54 PM
Joined: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,325 Louisiana Michael LeBlanc Top 10 Poster
Michael LeBlanc Top 10 Poster Joined: Jan 2005 Posts: 13,325 Louisiana	I like this one John!If you put a homemade stomp box under your foot that'd be cool!Mike

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane Michael LeBlanc #988221 12/15/12 04:15 PM
Joined: Jan 2003 Posts: 2,899 bossier city, LA. USA Richard Scott Top 100 Poster
Richard Scott Top 100 Poster Joined: Jan 2003 Posts: 2,899 bossier city, LA. USA	John, I enjoyed it! Are you going to redo it after you get set back up? :))))) scotty http://www.reverbnation.com/scottysongwriteronlyvariousmusicians#!/control_room/artist/1442425/songs http://www.cdbaby.com/Artist/Geauxcountrymusic http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=34439 Richard Scott/Songwriter @ Facebook.com

Re: This Must Be A Hurricane Richard Scott #988308 12/16/12 04:34 AM
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OP johnlobello Serious Contributor J Joined: Apr 2009 Posts: 47	I Appreciate the listen Michael. I like your stomp box idea...in the past I have used a piece of plywood with a mic in different positions around it. Thanks for listening Richard. I'll keep working on it and may redo it.

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