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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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wrote this for a girl ,
goodnight ...good bye nothing more to say you know..I tryed it's gotta be this way I loved ..your eyes still not enough to stay maybe..sometime but just can't be today
I feel all the emmotions and I know you feel em too but theres no sense in pretending when I can't follow thru my heart is with another and I gotta stay true so till we meet again I hold this image of you
so now..it seems can't get you off my mind you know..I've dreamed and it's taking all of my time I'm wrong.. you'll see thank god we never tryed
I feel all the emmotions and I know you feel em too but theres no sense in pretending when I can't follow thru so till we meet again I hold this image of you
goodnight .. good bye you know i gotta stay true goodnight ..good bye I can only dream of you
I feel all the emmotions and I know you feel em too but theres no sense in pretending when I can't follow thru so till we meet again I hold this imamge of you i will hold this image of you
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Hi Tom,
Something about the raw honesty here is compelling!
One thing -- when he says "maybe sometime -- just not today" -- I think it takes away from the song. He's saying that he's faithful to the other woman, and I don't think the song needs that much uncertainty.
Oh, and nice to meet you!
Lisa
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lisa thanks, it was wrote for a girl, and she wanted a pop kinda song for her cd , so ... yea that part has hit me a few times. thanks for the read , have another line I been looking to put in , Thank god for raw , or I would not be able to write at all !! lol rock
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Hi Tom Agree with Lisa on the "maybe sometime" I think it would take the empathy away from the the singer and portray him/her as a serial cheater who casually dumps his/her lovers. Like the rest of it though Travis
Last edited by Travis david; 11/11/11 07:55 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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THANKS , BUT " KINDA FITS, SHE'S WITH ANOTHER ANOTHER , BUT BEING HONEST , MAYBE SOME DAY, JUST NOT TODAY, " SHE IS WITH ANOTHER , NOT SURE IT IS LOVE , SO... NOT TODAY , THANKS WILL LOOK AT IT MORE, A GIRL IN CALlI SUNG IT , SOUNDS GREAT , TAKING IT TO NASHVILEE NEXT MONTH TO RECORD , WILL PU IT UP WHEN IT'S DONE , HAS A GREAT POP SOUND ROCK ON , sorry didnt know my caps was on , my bad
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