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Hey, Bayoufantasy just E-mailed you this but thought I would post it to see what all these other nitpickers think.
Lonestar must have known we were in love
They knew that you had come from above
Yeah they knew that this was true
Still baby I'm amazed by you
And Mr. Gill he knew you went away
Seems he was watchin' on that day
And things just aint the same
There was no answer when I called your name
But old Hank you know I think he put it best
To find some better words I'd be hard pressed
Sittin' here alone I start to cry
Cause' I'm so lonesome I could die
Yeah I'm so amazed that noone answered
When I called your name
Now I'm so lonesome I could die
Bayoufantasy2 and Guitar1221
Watcha' Think?
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Dan
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Hey Dan, This is Scotty (Bayoufantasy's) song Pen to Paper and I think as usual it's terrific. Scotty is a Music Row songwriter in the making IMHO. The man is an endless cornucopia of brillant and unique ideas or old ones told from a new perspective. GO SCOTTY!! ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/biggrin.gif) Best, Cindy
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Hey now wait a minute,
You didn't tell me what you thought about my pickin and rewritin'. I'd like to get a piece of that Music Row too ,,, if you know what I Mean. Just bein fisascious(is that a word?). Guess I need to get the dictionary out. NOT!!!
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By the way I'm new to this What is IMHO,? you cussin' me out or what?
Dan
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Sorry, Dan. OOOPS! I didn't realize you had tweaked this and re-written it with Scotty. My bad and duh on me. And no I'm not cussin' you out! LOL. IMHO means "in my humble opinion". So sorry for the oversight in not realizing this was a re-write. It looks pretty dern good! Fergive me puleez? Cindy
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Hey, I'm postin this cause I think Scott has somethin that will work.I don't know It's been done before but lets do it again. How y'all doin'. BYE\
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Dan
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hey Dan,, now THAT is great hook/title....
I DON'T KNOW(CARE) IF IT'S BEEN DONE BEFORE, LET'S DO IT AGAIN!!!
yipeeee. I like the sound of that!
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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Hey Red if you rub me I will grant you all the songs you want forever!!!!
I dated a girl named Jeannie one time!!! It didn't happen though I wasyoung and so was she. Where did you grow up???
Dan
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You can sure jump from topic to topic ya know that? I grew up in let's see now
Born Albert Lea Minnesota
from there.... it goes like this
Northwood Iowa
Rising Sun Iowa
Altoona Iowa (pig farm)
Coal Valley Illinois (trailer park, mom and 5 kids yikes!)
Owatonna Minnesota(lived with my grandmother from 9th to 12th grade, don't ask)
Long Beach California(went to college)
Hollywood California(worked for Max Factor)
Norwalk California(got married)
Phoenix Arizona
Prescott Arizona
Scottsville Kentucky(tried to get close to nashville but not too close.. and made big mistake! lol)
Oak Grove Kentucky
Portland Tennessee
Franklin Tennessee
I've been around a few blocks.. I liked Arizona the best...but Prescott didn't have music row.. (although they do have WHISKEY ROW) haha
[This message has been edited by redwriter1 (edited 03-04-2003).]
"It Mattered to THAT One"
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dan... sorry... i had to watch 24 on TV tonite so i just got the chance to get here. i like the rework on the hank verse.... i think the song is gonna be short though... so maybe put back in the so they/he put pen to paper lines and it will let you musically lead up to the final lines? just my tought??? ![[Linked Image]](http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/smile.gif) scotty [This message has been edited by bayoufantasy2 (edited 03-04-2003).]
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I ain't no recluse and bayou Iwill go on with it .. I can do this song without pen to paper and put music to it too ,.. Love ya'
And I do love you Redwriter and don't care who knows!!! I know it needs to be longer but Scott has already done the hard work!@!!!! Thanks
DAN
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Hey, Scott I'm gettin' on my geefiddle now to try and work with this thing , will let you know how it comes out.(Geefiddle is my second love i.e. My guitar.
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DAN
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Hey Y'all
I'm just postin this reply cause' I think Scott has got some good stuff as myself so it will get to the top of the forum. No pride !! Shameless!! Oh that's
Garth doin' Billy Joel though ain't it !!
DAN
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dan... get that geefiddle crankin and do us right!! scotty
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Hey brother,
when my wife comes home I put it away but I think that is all about to change also. Hey give me some grats, I finally been published. Scott I worked on it today and really didn't get anywhere with it but you are a good writer !! KUDOS
DAN
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