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Larry V. wrapped a tune around this lyric that Janice and I penned awhile back. Please let us know what you think. http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10210970Brick by Brick © 2010 Janice Hopkins, Greg C. Brown, Larry Vannatta Grandpa Foley turned 90 last May, The family all came out to celebrate. Most of his years had all been kind, His feet were moving slowly, but not his mind. He started working at an early age, Forty-one years in the building trade. Concrete, mortar, hard work and sweat; He couldn’t look back on a single regret He told me, you know you’re nearly grown You’ll soon be leaving your momma and home So… CHORUS Build your place in this world, Call it your own, Brick by brick And stone by stone. Use two steady hands ‘til the pieces fit, Add a little love just to make it stick. And build a life worth living Brick by brick. I listened closely but I was so young Didn’t know then what I'd become. But at 18 years, he gave me a clue, Said life’s made up of what you’re willin’ to do. His good advice spun around in my head, I never forgot the words that he said. REPEAT CHORUS BRIDGE When I got word that Grandpa’d passed away, I knew he’d earned his bonus at last. Things aren’t created in the blink of an eye, It’s the slow, forward steps that make a life. Like he told me that time….. CHORUS Build your place in this world, Call it your own, Brick by brick And stone by stone. Use two steady hands ‘til the pieces fit, Add a little love just to make it stick. And build a life worth living Brick by brick. And build a life worth living, Brick by brick.
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Hi Greg And Jan,
Hey I'm surprised there aren't a lot more hits on this one. I loved it. LArry did his usual great take on the lyrics. I couldn't find a nit in the lyrics and the melody is a real catchy one. Great storyline that we all can relate to for sure. Young,old,rich poor--it's what we're all tryin to do. nice job, Roger
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Roger Sosnowski The happiest people in life are those involved in music
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YOUALL--
I've lived long enough to appreciate the truth, and ideas behind this song--THIS IS A FINE-TUNED PRODUCTION, I enjoyed it enough to listen TWICE--
WRITE ON and GOOD LUCK!
Mackie
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Happy Belated Birthday Greg!
Nice group effort with this song. The writing is really tight, the mellow music fits the lyrics well and the production is well done. I like it.
Ricki
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Lots of solid writing in this one. I especially love the first verse which sets the table for this song beautifully and leads smoothly into the equally strong message of the chorus. I also liked the immaculate arrangement of the song and the lower end of the vocals. Wow! That's one of the better bass voices I've heard in awhile. This song has a great message and a ton of potential and I wish you luck with it.
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Nicely done! This song has a nice melody and a well-crafted storyline with a wonderful message. I enjoyed it.Thanks for sharing.
Jennifer (Jinx) Shaner
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I'll admit something here. I often listen to my local country station. I also very often switch to the next station, 'cause what I hear is frquently "not to my taste". My immediate reaction here was, "Why isn't a song like this on the radio?" I thought it very well done, excellent singing. Ott
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Hi Greg, Janice and Larry,
What a real; nice song. I loved it all. If it was mine I would be 100% happy on it.
Still not sure if I like your new avatar Greg or the old one better lol.
God Bless Roy and Helen
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Hey Roger, thanks for your usual kind support! I'm glad you think this one is working. I appreciate you getting the ball rolling with the comments, too.
Take care.
Greg
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Well, Mackie, if you were inclined to listen twice, then I'd say we've done our job. If you really wanna live on the edge, give it a third spin. Thanks so much for the feedback and words of encouragement. Means a lot to all of us. Greg
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Hi Ricki. Thanks for the birfday greeting. It was a nice day.
I'm glad you liked our little offering here. From a musical standpoint, we think Larry did a great job, so we're especially proud of how it came out.
Thank you for the visit and the kind words!
Greg
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Thanks, Bobby, that means a lot and we appreciate it more than you know.
Take care.
Greg
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Hi Jinx (hijinx? ). I don't believe we've met. Welcome...if you're new to JPF. I've been somewaht MIA lately and have missed a few new names and faces. Hope you like it here. I'm glad our song seems to be working for you. Thank you so much for listening, liking, and saying so. Have a great day! Greg
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Hi Ott. I like the way you think. Maybe, before we pass on to the next world, we'll hear this one on the airwaves. We can always hope and dream, right?
Thanks for your kind and supportive words. We're thrilled you like this.
Greg (and Jan and Larry)
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Hi Roy. Hope my avatar isn't too disturbing. I've been meaning to see a dermatologist about my skin condition. Thanks for taking a few minutes of your time to give our song a listen. I hope it was worth the 3 - 4 minutes you gave up. We all appreciate the support and encouragement. Take care. Greg
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Folks, this is what it's all about. Y'all better get this on the radio or I just don't know what. 'course I ain't s'prised in the least.
John
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This is the old country stuff I used to listen to. Good story & the production fits everything nice. Everything I hear on the country station nowadays sounds like noise. Just about anyone can put on some skin tight leather pants, shake their butt around on the stage, and make a bunch of noise. We need to hear more good tunes like this, with classic American country sound, and good lyrics to boot.
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Roger....so glad that this is working for your ears....thanks so much for listening for us....we all appreciate that!
Jan
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Mackie....gee...twice! Well, we thank you doubly, then. So glad that you liked it and that you could relate to the lyric.
We always appreciate your comments.
Jan
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Ricki...thanks so much for stopping by....glad that it seems to be working for you. We appreciate that you listened and commented. I hope all is well with you and yours.
Jan
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Bobby....thanks so very much. We are so happy that you like this one. Also....glad that the message is coming through, that we intended.
Larry has a great voice and is one fine musician. Greg and I are honored to work with him from time to time.
Jan
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Jen....thanks so much for taking the time to listen for us...we're glad that you enjoyed it. Nice to meet you, too!
Jan
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Roy...thanks a million for giving this a listen for us....so glad that you enjoyed all but Greg's avatar...HA!
We appreciate it...alot! Thanks again.
Jan
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Greg & Janice, Just listened to your latest. Straight forward lyrics and a full production highlight this salute to the common sense wisdom of the working man.
I had an uncle who was a bricklayer. Made me think of him.
I notice others hear this as an old time country song. I'm not so sure. It has an old-style arrangement. But the formula sounds like what they use in Nashville today and with a more modern arrangement I think it would be right down main street Nashville and could be slipped into last year's or next month's radio playlist.
My only suggestion is that Greg get rid of that awful avatar. It's hideous.
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John....thanks so much for giving this a listen....and for the uplifting, encouraging comments. We really appreciate that. We are so glad that you like this one.
It was a fun one to write.....
Jan
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Kevin....We are so glad that this one seems to have hit your ears and heart right....all the way around. We're so glad that you listened to it for us....it's always so much appreciated. So happy that our efforts are understood.
Thanks again,
Jan
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Dan....."Last year's or next month's radio playlist?" Well, now that has a nice ring to it, doesn't it?
Thanks so very much for giving this one a listen for us. We're glad that it meets with favor on your part. That is so appreciated. We will give that newer arrangement idea, a thought. Then we would have two versions to pitch.
Thanks Dan,
Jan
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Hi Greg and gang Nice work! Sounded good. Some effective stuff going on in there. In a pitching situation I would consider that it has a 60's feeling to it. Like a Peter Paul & Mary vibe, a bit of Creedence or some British pop groups of that time. While it has some Country elements it still has the that more vintage way about it in song style, sound and performance. All those things would hurt you if that was a plan or goal for this one. Other than that it was an enjoyable song All the best you guys Mike
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Hi--Greg/Janice/Larry This is a job well done. If I heard it on the radio, I'd be folling right along with it. Good delivery of the song & I really like this.... Use two steady hands ‘til the pieces fit, Add a little love just to make it stick. ! QUALITY WORK ! Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Thanks Mike...you have given us all food for thought and we always appreciate that alot.
So glad that you stopped by to listen for us.
Jan
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Calvin...hope all is well in the great state of Fla. It's been five years now, since I lived there for Winter's for the sake of the "mouse".
Thanks so much for giving this a listen for us. We're glad that you enjoyed it....and we appreciate your comments so much.
Jan and the guys
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I love this style wonderful music, so well played
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Hi Tom, how are you? Thanks for giving this one a few minutes of your time. We enjoyed working on it and are thrilled that it seems to be going over well with folks.
We appreciate your visit and feedback. Much appreciated.
Greg
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Back to the head of the class.
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Really nice job on this one all y'all. I can tell a lot of TLC went into it.
(Heya Greg!)
Cheers,
BC
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