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Liebe Freunde,

wie manche von Euch vielleicht bereits wissen, verfasse ich Songtexte in mehreren Sprachen, so auch in Deutsch. Ich hoffe, es gelingt mir, diese ein wenig aus dem Rahmen der „Banalitaet“ herauszuheben. Zwar habe ich einige Zeit Klavier gespielt, doch ist mein Sinn fuer das Komponieren eher rudimentaer, weshalb ich auf der Suche nach jemandem bin, der dieses Defizit kompensieren und meinen Texten musikalisch Leben einhauchen wuerde. Wie Ihr vielleicht feststellen werdet, haben mich v.a. Udo Juergens und Reinhard Mey inspiriert, so dass es, glaube ich, nicht verkehrt waere, wenn der musikalische Stil in diese Richtung ginge, doch sollte dies eher als Vorschlag denn als „Bedingung“ gelten.
Sollte jemand an einer Zusammenarbeit in diesem Sinne interessiert sein, wurede ich mich sehr, sehr freuen, von Euch zu hoeren, entweder ueber dieses Forum, IM oder ueber meine Email-Adresse:
petar.noack@freenet.de

Vielen Dank!


Ein ein wenig anderes Lied über die Liebe (lyrics in German)

(verses)
Ich glaub` es war ein Fehler, Medizin einst zu studieren,
musst ich doch erfahren, dass Dinge, die uns tief berühren,
wie die Liebe, so banal und sachlich sind…

Ja, es gibt Dinge, von den sollte man die Finger lassen,
und nicht alles lässt sich in Formeln oder Worte fassen,
lasst Gefühle durch mehr Wissen nicht verblassen,
das ist verkehrt, das ist nicht fair, wie ich find`…

Ich erinnere mich noch an die Uni, erste Stunde,
Professor Becker, „Jungs und Mädels“, sagte er, „im Grunde
ist Liebe nur ein Cocktail aus Chemie…

Ein Zusammenspiel aus Lobus frontalis* und Hormonen,
so banal, ja, gar so vorhersehbar sind Emotionen,
ach, nur ein paar unbewusste Projektionen,
Hologramme aus dem Gyrus cinguli*…“

(bridge)
Ich weiß, dieses Wissen wird wohl keinem schmecken,
macht es uns doch nur zu Deppen,
dirigiert vom limbischen System*,
doch dies scheint mir zu furchtbar und zudem noch zu bequem…

(chorus)
Ja, dann wären wir wie Marionetten,
die selbst nichts zu melden hätten,
Freunde, dies zu glauben, bin ich nicht gewillt…

Wenn dies wahr wär`, woher dann der Dichter Feder?
wozu Rosen, wenn ein jeder
nicht genau das wär`, was er fühlt?

Ich bin mit mir hier im Reinen,
und denk` mir den Teil, den meinen,
für mich alleine stumm und still…

Ich werd´ dich wie jeher lieben,
lieber fische ich im Trüben,
doch dafür lieb` ich dich so, wie ich will…


(verses)
Ich versuch´ sie zu verdrängen, Herr Professor`s „weise“ Worte,
seit zwölf Jahren …umsonst…, was sind wir Menschen doch für Sorte,
wird mir schier nur für Momente kurz bewusst…

Versteht mich nicht falsch, Forschung ist gut, und die soll es geben,
doch nicht nach Vernichtung des Stücks Romantik sollt` sie streben,
das uns bleibt, drum lieb` die Liebe, leb` das Leben,
du musst nicht alles wissen, was du nicht wissen musst…

Was nun laut dem Professor von uns denn noch übrigbliebe,
frag` ich mich… weiß ich nicht… doch auf den Schwingen warmer Liebe
klingt Glutamat* und auch GABA* arg zu kühl…

Ich lass` mich nicht auf Chemie noch Hormone reduzieren,
und müsste ich, so kröch´ ich zu dir selbst auf allen vieren,
was hat mich der Limbus* zu interessieren,
wenn du mich liebst, solang` ich das fühl`, was ich fühl`…

(chorus)
Sind viel mehr nicht wir als Marionetten,
die selbst nichts zu melden hätten,
Freunde, dies zu glauben, bin ich nicht gewillt…

Wenn dies wahr wär`, woher dann der Dichter Feder?
wozu Rosen, wenn ein jeder
nicht genau das wär`, was er fühlt?

Ich bin mit mir hier im Reinen,
und denk` mir den Teil, den meinen,
für mich alleine stumm und still…

Ich werd´ dich wie jeher lieben,
lieber fische ich im Trüben,
doch dafür lieb` ich dich so, wie ich will…


*Lobus frontalis: anatomical description for the anterior part of the brain where the personality is localized
*Gyrus cinguli: part of the brain, localized laterally, part of the limbic system that - among other things - is responsible for sexuality/feelings
*limbic system: see under Gyrus cinguli
*Glutamat: neurotransmiter, activating type
*GABA: neurotransmitter, inhibiting type
*limbus = limbic system, see under Gyrus cinguli

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These could be the greatest lyrics I've ever read and might even be the next Hallelujah!



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Plavi,

Please send again the English version so people can read your lyric.

Sprecken zie English? No Deutsch lotta.

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Rough German to English translation


As some of you may already know, I write lyrics in several languages, including German. I hope I succeed in this a little out of context of the "banality" lifted out. Although I have some time played piano, but my sense is for composing rather rudimentary, so I'm looking for someone who would compensate for this deficit and breathe into my lyrics musical life. As you'll might find me va Udo Juergens and Reinhard Mey inspired, so it is, I do not think that would be wrong if the musical style would go in that direction, but this should rather be considered as a proposal for a "condition".
If someone is interested in cooperating in this sense, I would be delighted much hear from you, either via this forum, IM or via my email address:
petar.noack @ freenet.de

Thank you!


A somewhat different song about love (from German)

(Verses)
`I think it was a mistake to study medicine once
but I have learned that things that touch us deeply,
like love, are so banal and objective ...

Yes, there are things one should refrain from writing
not everything can be expressed in words or formulas,
let feelings be known so knowledge does not fade,
this is wrong, that's not fair, as I find `...

I remember at the university, first hour,
Professor Becker, "Boys and girls," he said, "basically
love is just a cocktail of chemicals ...

A combination of frontal lobe * and hormones,
so banal, so, so very predictable emotions
oh, just a few unconscious projections,
Holograms from the cingulate gyrus * ... "

(Bridge)
I know this packet will not taste good,
it would make us kin to idiots,
conducted by the limbic system *
but this seems so terrible, and too easy ...

(Chorus)
Yes, we would be like puppets
the report itself would say nothing
Friends, to believe this, am I not ready...

`If ​​this were true, then what about poetry?
including roses and such, if each
were unsure about how would they feel it

Deep inside I feel and see,
and know the things I mean
There's peace silent and still ...

I'll love you forever,
swimming in troubled waters,
I still love you until...


(Verses)
I'll try to repress it, Professor `s" as "words,
for twelve years ... nothing ... what are we humans but for variety,
I am aware of some short moments ...

Don't get me wrong, research is good, and which will give it,
but not the destruction of the piece romance `should they strive for
that remains to us, So dear the love we live on;
You don't have to know everything ...... to know ...

What now, according to the professor some of us would be left,
`I ask myself ... but don't know ... on the wings of warm love
sweet sugar sounds absolutely too cool ...

I don't wanna be reduced to chemistry or hormones,
but i could crawl back on all fours to,
what held my interest to the limbus *
if you love me, `I feel as long as the` what `I feel ...

(Chorus)
Are we not much more than puppets,
the report itself would have nothing
Friends, to believe this, am I not willing ...

`If ​​this were true, then where the poet spring?
including roses, if each
not sure that would `what he feels?

I'm in here with me pure,
and think 'me the part, the mean
on my own silent and still ...

I'll love you as always,
I prefer to fish in troubled waters,
but it `I love you so, as I will ...


* Frontal lobe: anatomical description for the anterior part of the brain where the personality is localized
* Cingulate gyrus: part of the brain, localized laterally, part of the limbic system that - among other things - is responsible for sexuality / feelings
* Limbic system: see under cingulate gyrus
* Glutamate: neurotransmitter, activating type
* GABA: neurotransmitter, inhibiting type
* = Limbus limbic system, cingulate gyrus see under

PRETTY DEEP STUFF, EH!

WRITE ON--

Mackie

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