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#848285 - 10/03/10 10:08 PM
I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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TamsNumber4
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A wonderful lyric by the talented Jennifer who I admire and music by Andy who I continue to be in awe of. I was asked to be a part of this amazing song and I feel so fortunate and am so happy with the outcome! I'LL BE ON MY WAY on SoundClick I'll Be On My Way by Jennifer (Jinx) Shaner © 2010 I feel cold inside despite the heat Feel pleasure, yet pain Love once made me whole I’m now incomplete and broken again I look in your eyes Which once warmed my soul The fire’s now gone There’s heat in your touch But love is not there It’s time to move on (prechorus) I must find the strength to run I’m not the type to just have fun (chorus) Your promises mean nothing now I need to break away somehow Love is what I had but lost Now it’s time to pay I will not stay yours to use I may be hurt, my ego bruised But without love’s the meaning’s lost I’ll now be on my way An empty touch Can’t fill the holes When love is gone Hiding my pain I act out my roles And try to move on Ignoring the pain I put on a smile And face each new day I know I was right To push you aside You were just in my way (prechorus) Within my chest my heart still bleeds I’m dead and yet I live And yet to taste what love can be Again my heart I’d give (chorus) Your promises mean nothing now I need to break away somehow Love is what I had but lost Now it’s time to pay I will not stay yours to use I may be hurt, my ego bruised But without love’s the meaning’s lost I’ll now be on my way
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#848362 - 10/04/10 06:44 AM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Andy Kemp
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Thanks Guy's, Tammy did an amazing job with this one. She really amazed me with her style and technique, she truly is a very talented lady. The lyrics that Jen aka Jinx wrote for this are so good they just fitted perfectly to the track. It's cool you guys like it and it's great to hear Tammy with a big ROCK track behind her vocals  Rgds Andy
Work for hire Producer. I will also produce and master any old/new work tapes up to demo standards. :-) Just PM or email: Email -- mork1976@gmail.com
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#848507 - 10/04/10 08:53 PM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Michele Howlett
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Hi Tammy, Jennifer, & Andy Wow I just love this, and Tammy their is nothing stopping you now hah, Go girl.  My only suggestion that I felt was, I wouldn't of slowed it down after the first pre chorus and chorus, I would of kept up with the speed from their, (Younger generation attraction).  Great collaboration, I'm a fan!  Hugs Michele
Last edited by Michele Bolton; 10/04/10 08:56 PM.
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#848510 - 10/04/10 09:05 PM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Hi Tammy, Jennifer, Andy You all went over the top with this one! Wow, this is really a great song WTG!! Dottie
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#848519 - 10/04/10 09:28 PM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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YesterdaysAddiction
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Wonderful vibe here- musically and lyrically reminiscent of Evanescense. Love the overdriven guitar in the chorus- GREAT Riff.
The phrasing in the guitar lead is also quite tasty- clearly Andy knows his way around the fret board. The tone of the guitar, which sounds like a strat on the middle or neck pickup, is unexpected- I would have been looking for a screaming lead in this one- but it is a very pleasant surprise!
A very cool tune, the piano is beautiful and the guitar is a powerful contrast. And lyrically, the unrequited love theme with a sharper edge- I loved it.
Jeff Moore
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#848640 - 10/05/10 04:25 AM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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What an amazing and haunting sound in the verse. I also love the prechorus buildup. I agree with Jeff about the 'Evanescense' feel. Somehow the chorus melody and the chorus musical chord progression seem to realy clash as if they were'nt in the same key or something. (Maybe this was intentional .. or maybe I'm just too traditional Bridge/Outro is great ... with the singing "I'll be on my way." Great recording, singing, and music. Another wonderful song. g
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#848801 - 10/05/10 09:10 PM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Michele Howlett
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Hi again Tammy, Jennifer, & Andy, I thought I'd have another listen to see if I felt the same, Hmm, maybe, maybe not, maybe just a little faster then the first verse hah. Keep it or sweep it, just a suggestion. Congratulations, I'm still a fan.  Hugs Michele
Last edited by Michele Bolton; 10/05/10 09:12 PM.
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#848895 - 10/06/10 07:48 AM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Andy Kemp
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Thanks for taking the time to listen guys. It's still a work in progress and it might change a lot before it's finished as I'm a bit in two minds about the chorus section. Not with the vocals just the guitar part as the more I listen to it I get the feeling that it over powers the vocals. I might also change the style o the drums.
So the song will get tweaked a bit when I get a spare second or two.
But thanks for all of the support it mean a lot. I just love hearing Tammy singing with a full band behind her.
Rgds
Andy
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#848903 - 10/06/10 09:43 AM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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OK, First-Off, This is a fascinating, Lovely, Haunting Song you've all put-together. Very Dramatic, Lyrically, Vocally, Musically..the Musical Shift from Verses to Choruses is VERY Dramatic. (Tho Tammy either needs to take a bit more time singing "YOUR promises"...or just drop the "Your" from line 1.)
The Guitar Work on the Outro, while truly elegant, runs this into the 4:28 mark...which makes for a pretty-hefty "Demo"..& may or may not help future Airplay Opportunities.
That Said, this is a Really BEAUTIFUL Sad-Yet-Survivor's Song, & CONGRATS to the Whole Bunch of Yas. Each of you are Powerful...United, it's downright Invincible what you're creating. Good Luck with it!
Best Wishes & Big Hugs,
Stan
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#848987 - 10/06/10 05:12 PM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Caroline
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Hey guys,
That is just friggen awesome!
This is a beautifully written song. (Jinx,you rock, girl!)
The music fits both the lyric and vocal very well.
The parts I'm hearing which may be touched up, (well, the part) is the pc and c, Tammy's vocal seems to begin to get lost in the music and is almost a background to it. Sounds like she needs to be a bit more out front, but other than that I can't find a damn thing wrong with it.
I'm going in for another few listens!If I'm not back in twenty minutes, leave me alone...LOL
Last edited by Caroline; 10/06/10 05:14 PM.
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#851252 - 10/17/10 11:18 AM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Andy Kemp
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The song is pretty, but listening to it hurts...
Please guys, do something about the mix. The pretty music is just on the right (mono) and Tammy´s beautiful vocals are just left (mono)... Hi Martin Thanks for he listen but I think you've got something wrong with your setup. The mix is good. Hi Steve, Thanks for taking a listen to the track. It's still a bit rough but when Abbey Road is free I'll get it finished Rgds Andy
Work for hire Producer. I will also produce and master any old/new work tapes up to demo standards. :-) Just PM or email: Email -- mork1976@gmail.com
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#851471 - 10/18/10 06:17 AM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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R1NGG1T
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Thanks Tammy! I had a listen and... Wow... what more can I say ![[Linked Image]](http://www.jpfolks.com/forum/images/icons/default/thumbs_up.gif) This is the kind of stuff I'd like to hear more of on the radio. Tighten up the production a bit and you're good to go. Overall, awesome job guys! Tammy, you have a great voice--very distinct. Especially like your vocal performance on Sweetest Melodies. Cheers, R1NGG1T
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#852183 - 10/21/10 01:54 AM
Re: I'll Be On My Way - collab w/ Jinx and Andy
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Carlos Tabora
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What an amazing and haunting sound in the verse. I also love the prechorus buildup. I agree with Jeff about the 'Evanescense' feel. Somehow the chorus melody and the chorus musical chord progression seem to realy clash as if they were'nt in the same key or something. (Maybe this was intentional .. or maybe I'm just too traditional Bridge/Outro is great ... with the singing "I'll be on my way." Great recording, singing, and music. Another wonderful song. g Great job on this song. I completely agree with the Evanescence comment. This song would be a good pitch for TV and film in my opinion. Keep up the collabs Jennifer! Sounds like you're on your way. Carlos
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