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#851216 - 10/17/10 05:10 AM Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Ok this making my own music is hard... esp when I try and make the chorus different..but this is a work in progress..at times I think I was shoving the mic up my nose...but does the music work..i'll try and record it this week ...thanks glyn http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=9768815 Ain't No MOre I’ve always been my own girl, With the innocence and beauty Of a newborn filly colt born into the world Knew what I wanted had my head on straight But I fell in love with a raging bull Chargin' outta the gate Two stubborn heads ..colliding in a bed of lies I was spoiled and pampered This I can't deny Still it gave you no right to try and beat me down Treated me worse than an unwanted Flea bitten hound I don’t know WHO you think you are You need to take a second look I'll tell you what you can do "Note to Self" in your Lil' Black Book If I was as bad as you say I wouldn’t wanna live with me Threw your bags to the curb No love here to mend Ain't gonna take no more Ain’t No More Everything felt so right for the first year or two You were so perfect I knew your love was true Then you started accusing me of things you would do Covering up lies, pickin' fights staying out late You tried to bring me down I've had all I can take Friends say lets sit and talk what’s going on You don’t laugh or smile no more , you sit home all alone We miss you on Sundays singing your pretty songs That ole’ devil'll tease you, try to get under your skin He knows there's no way on THIS earth He'll ever win I don’t know WHO you think you are You need to take a second look I'll tell you what you can do "Note to Self" in your Lil’ Black Book If I was as bad as you say I wouldn’t wanna live with me Threw your bags to the curb No love here to mend Ain't gonna take no more Ain’t No More As I step outside tonight, I’ll look to the skies and smile..you said no other man could love me……….....WHATEVER… Ain’t No More Ain’t No More Copyright 2010/BMI written by glyn I'm reworking the lyrics now and the music too...... Last edited by glynda; 10/18/10 09:44 AM. http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851224 - 10/17/10 09:49 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 10,938 Kevin Emmrich
Kevin Emmrich Top 10 Poster Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 10,938 Crozet, VA	Hey, that intro music was pretty good. Every musical composition seems to be better than the one before it. Just think where you were 2 years ago or 1 year ago -- tons of difference. Of course, the music time takes away from writing lyrics -- but how many songs do you need (ha, ha)? I think your creation of music will lead to better lyrics as you learn what fits and what doesn't. OK, on this one, I won't mention the distortion on the vocals due to recording too hot (oops, I just mentioned it) -- but I am sure you noticed that. One good things about setting it to music is you get to see how it works. Right now, it feels like way too many words and the "hook" is too buried in there. Now it is time for the re-writing process. Good luck -- you are doing great! Kevin "Good science comes in peer reviewed journals. Conspiracy theories come in YouTube videos. " Kevin @ bandcamp: Crows Say Vee-Eh (and Kevin @50/90 2019)

#851231 - 10/17/10 10:21 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Kevin Emmrich]
Joined: Mar 2009 Posts: 424 Steve Cooke Serious Contributor
Steve Cooke Serious Contributor Joined: Mar 2009 Posts: 424 Stockton-on-Tees, UK	This definitely sounds promising, Glynda. The main musical sequence is attractive but you'll need to find ways of varying the arrangement at different points in the song if it's to sustain people's interest. Perhaps you could bring in and drop out elements of it as the piece progress, change the drum pattern, and suchlike. Maybe start without any drums at all and then introduce them at the first chorus, or halfway through the first verse, and then come up with another event to signal the start of the second verse. And so on. The vocal sounds like it was recorded either with the microphone too close to your mouth or with the input levels set too high, possibly both. Steve Cooke Stockton-on-Tees, UK http://wwww.soundcloud.com/stevecooke

#851253 - 10/17/10 11:29 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Steve Cooke]
Joined: Aug 2010 Posts: 741 Andy Kemp Top 500 Poster
Andy Kemp Top 500 Poster Joined: Aug 2010 Posts: 741 UK Wales	The music is good, in fact it's very good. When I first started to listen to it I had the feeling that it was an intro to a kids TV programme. It's defiantly got potential and Steve has given some great advice about maybe dropping the drums for a few bars just to add a bit more interest to the track. The mic is the only problem and you know that so I shall say no more. Cool track liked it a lot Andy Work for hire Producer. I will also produce and master any old/new work tapes up to demo standards. :-) Just PM or email: Email -- mork1976@gmail.com

#851266 - 10/17/10 12:27 PM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Andy Kemp]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Hi Kevin.. Yep, this is hard work..got so much to learn..if I knew chords and music theory it would help..but i'm doing it by ear..but hey, like you say it's better than what I was doing...thanks for all your help..glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851267 - 10/17/10 12:29 PM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Steve..thanks for listening..yeah..got to learn how to do that..I'm using jamstudios...and I've tried to just put in certain instruments at different points but it still comes out all together....but i'm sure i'll figure it out...have so much to learn about all this..but it's fun seeing what I can come up with..thanks for your comments and I'll keep working on it..glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851268 - 10/17/10 12:33 PM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Thanks Andy...I'm already a huge fan of you, you're music is so great..so, I really appreciate your comments...and i'm still learning this music stuff..it's hard..but i'll keep working on it..that makes me feel good you liked it...that made me smile.. this time last year I never thought i'd be even writing any more.. i've been through so much..so for me to be doing music or even trying to sing is a major break through for me...could not have done this a year ago...was so sick..but i'm better now and look at me goooooo...thanks glyn Last edited by glynda; 10/17/10 12:35 PM. http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851269 - 10/17/10 12:48 PM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	AND...KEVIN...THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT...YOU ASKING US LAST YEAR WHY THE LYRIC ONLY FOLKS DIDN'T DO MUSIC...NOW SEE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE....REMEMBER THE LIL' ORGAN THINGY I DID!!!! I should repost that just for a laugh....glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851345 - 10/17/10 06:56 PM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Sep 2008 Posts: 2,526 Polly Hager Helping Hand
Polly Hager Helping Hand Joined: Sep 2008 Posts: 2,526 Cincinnati, OH USA	I think the lyric is really good, and the music sounds nice, but I'm not sure the melody is quite there yet and sometimes you're rushing to fit all the words in. For ME, the melody is a real bear! I have a very hard time with that. I have to enlist my Nashville cat for that most times. http://www.soundclick.com/pollyhager http://www.facebook.com/polly.wilmot http://www.reverbnation.com/rockcandycincy You're supposed to be grooving as hard as you can, all of the time. - Stephen Gaskin

#851350 - 10/17/10 07:02 PM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 10,938 Kevin Emmrich
Kevin Emmrich Top 10 Poster Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 10,938 Crozet, VA	Originally Posted by glynda AND...KEVIN...THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT...YOU ASKING US LAST YEAR WHY THE LYRIC ONLY FOLKS DIDN'T DO MUSIC...NOW SEE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE....REMEMBER THE LIL' ORGAN THINGY I DID!!!! I should repost that just for a laugh....glyn Yes, there are a few folks that have tackled the music thing in the past year. I wish I could take the credit -- but it is you (and the others) that did it! Even if you don't do music on future collabs, the fact that you have that musical experience will make you a better lyric writer. Yes, you will need to learn theory/ This book is recommended: Edly's Music Theory for Practical People . I have it -- but haven't done much with it (sad to say). Keep doing it! Kevin "Good science comes in peer reviewed journals. Conspiracy theories come in YouTube videos. " Kevin @ bandcamp: Crows Say Vee-Eh (and Kevin @50/90 2019)

#851403 - 10/17/10 11:31 PM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Kevin Emmrich]
Joined: Aug 2010 Posts: 522 Roderic Serious Contributor
Roderic Serious Contributor Joined: Aug 2010 Posts: 522 Texas	Glynda, I like the idea of changing up the music. You know, as has been mentioned, drums, etc. Something else you could do, if you have the equipment, is add some harmony at different places in the song. I do like this very much and think it has a great beginning. Keep going. Rod Wisdom is not in words; wisdom is the meaning in words

#851416 - 10/18/10 12:22 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Roderic]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Polly, I do agree and i'm working on that..being new to this music side has my mind going a million places...this is hard work..but i'm working on it..at least i'm giving it a good try..thanks glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851418 - 10/18/10 12:23 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Kevin..this is true..but it is still in the back of my mind you asking that question..and I think that makes me try a little harder...anyway thanks for the push...glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851419 - 10/18/10 12:27 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Hi Rod, Thanks for liking this one..and as I say i'm still trying to figure this music stuff out..gotta see if I can figure out how to make these instruments do what I want them to and when I want them to...right now I change them where I want them but then, they go back like they were..but i'll figure it out..thanks glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#851420 - 10/18/10 12:35 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Roderic]
Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 838 Todd Strachan Top 500 Poster
Todd Strachan Top 500 Poster Joined: Aug 2009 Posts: 838 Detroit Michigan	BRAVO Glyn!!! It is not easy doing music, and this is coming along nicely. All of this takes time so just keep at it. I like the lyrics and this line in particular, Treated me worse than an unwanted flea bitten hound I think the melody needs a little work, and the delivery as well. Polly has trouble with the melody, I have trouble with delivery. It all takes time! Todd Everything we have has come from you, and we give you only what you have already given us! 1 Chronicles 29:14 www.soundclick.com/toddgstrachan

#851422 - 10/18/10 12:40 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Todd Strachan]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Todd, Thanks and you're right this ain't easy...but i'm very stubborn and will keep at it...thanks for checking it out for me..glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

#852428 - 10/22/10 07:39 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: glynda]
Joined: Apr 2002 Posts: 19,839 Calvin Top 10 Poster
Calvin Top 10 Poster Joined: Apr 2002 Posts: 19,839 Okeechobee, Florida U.S.A.	Hi, You're progressing well. And you've been given good advice. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart

#852433 - 10/22/10 09:45 AM Re: Aint' No More (now with music) work in progress* glyn [Re: Calvin]
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 glynda Top 20 Poster
glynda Top 20 Poster Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 8,683 Princeton Texas	Thank you Calvin...I really appreciate you checking this out for me...glyn http://www.youtube.com/GlyndasInterviews http://soundclick.com/songsbyglyn http://www.youtube.com/user/GlyndaDuncan http://www.krykey.com/Radio/PRSPage.aspx?id=2451 http://together.com/user/Radio_Interviews http://www.heartsofcountryradio.hostzi.com "MZ G..TEXAS LADY SHUM **IN HONOR OF TAMPA STAN

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