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#850031 - 10/12/10 12:06 AM New multi-genre song  
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Soren Mattson Offline
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Any feedback would be greatly appreciated for this song!

http://www.riffworld.com/Members/sorenm/sunflower

thanks,

soren

#850032 - 10/12/10 12:12 AM Re: New multi-genre song [Re: Soren Mattson]  
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People like to be able to read the lyric as well in this forum, Soren.


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#850042 - 10/12/10 12:50 AM Re: New multi-genre song [Re: Steve Cooke]  
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ah well here they are:

I've never wanted much of anything
I've never been so close but far away
I've never cared too much for pride
True beauty lies with you inside
dont leave these things behind

So much is gained by brutal honesty
So much is learned from all our past mistakes
I've lived to let a loved one go
I am sincere though I'm slow
I just wanted you to know

I find
Driving down the road I see your name
Hoping every time you feel the same

#850502 - 10/13/10 05:54 PM Re: New multi-genre song [Re: Soren Mattson]  
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Hi Soren

Real nice picking, playing and melody.... the synths sound are an interesting break from where you begin and then return.. The vocals really needs to be more in front of the mix. Good musical journey though. jm


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#850565 - 10/14/10 01:02 AM Re: New multi-genre song [Re: Joice Marie]  
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I really like your lyrics, they get one to thinking about all the meaning behind them, and the songs got that feel to it that I have always liked. An all around work of heart. !~~~MFB III

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