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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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Underappreciated Feels like I've waited, forever For my chance to arrive
Gonna show all the others I'm not just another I've got what it takes to survive
I will fight and make it through Till I've proven to you I deserve all that I'll gain
Won't give up or stop Till I'm sitting at the top And you'll all be saying my name
Chorus: Don't underestimate I'm here to dominate I'm finally taking control Not just a little girl I'm gonna rock your world Are you ready? Just watch me go
Forgotten and scorned My spirit was torn But I'm healed and I'm not gonna lose
My crying is done Now I'll prove I'm the one It's written on every bruise
A push was all I needed I'll never be defeated I'm done being kicked around
I'll never give in I've found the strength within Just listen to my sound
Chorus: Don't underestimate I'm here to dominate I'm finally taking control Not just a little girl I'm gonna rock your world Are you ready? Just watch me go
Bridge: Never giving up Never gonna stop Until I'm at the top
Chorus: Don't underestimate I'm here to dominate I'm finally taking control Not just a little girl I'm gonna rock your world Are you ready? Just watch me go
Last edited by squishy; 09/19/10 04:11 AM.
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Squishy,
It could be just me but I seem to be sensing a little anger here. Just kidding, I like the attitude! Reads as though something has been building for a long while and has finally decided to come out. Nice flow and good read.
Rod
Wisdom is not in words; wisdom is the meaning in words
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This flows really well, and has a lot of attitude! I like it!
Whenever you read someone else's lyrics, it's natural to want to reword it in your own way, and I wanted to reword the last line of "Are you ready? Just watch me go" to something with "roll"....I guess because the word "rock" was in the line before it. Something like, "I'm ready to roll.." The line also made me think of 9/11 when the passengers tried taking control of the hijacked plane. The one guy said, "Let's roll."
It's not really a nit, just something I naturally changed in my brain when I read the line......
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