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Landing
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/06/23 04:48 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/06/23 11:20 AM
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"Dwell"
by bennash - 12/06/23 09:55 AM
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4 Artists
by Guy E. Trepanier - 12/03/23 07:19 PM
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Snuts
by Gary E. Andrews - 12/03/23 05:01 AM
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Here's another one I recently dug up that was never posted before anywhere. I got the idea from a quote of Bob Dylan. He was talking about the typical love song and said "It's all I love you, you love me...Ooka dooka dicka dee."Ooka Dooka Da (c) Steven M. Biederman http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9219322Polite rejection notice In my mail today Said my song had promise Important stuff to say But the record man said I don't want to steer you wrong You want to write a hit Then kid you write a love song Ooka dooka da Dooka dicka dee I love you, you love me That's all the words a love song needs Gonna write a big hit It's showtime for me Appreciate your effort Your song sounds great But not the kind of message That's gonna get air play Gear it to the masses People can relate Elementary level Try about third grade He didn't hurt my feelings I took him at his word And after twenty minutes A song indeed occurred It turned out pretty well Not profound in any way Like the mindless kind of stuff That get's radio play Sex appeal's what matters Our culture's in the dregs But which came first Chicken or the egg Livin like dogs Livin like strays Everybody sniffin butts Everybody humpin legs Ooka dooka da Dooka dicka dee I love you, You love me That's all the words a love song needs If you lack imagination Or if you're just lazy Ooka dooka da Dooka dicka dee I love you, You love me Gonna give em what they want What they think they need make girls 15 to 50 go crazy
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HiDee Bro StevieB...
I remember this one from the tape ya kindly gave me Wayyy Back-When~!
It's still Good White Boy Rap...& Lots of FUN!
I'd sug ya go out on your Hook's Couplet with a Fade...It seems to end a bit-"Choppy" as 'tis.
But it's Overall GREAT FUN/Stays "Valid" as all get-out, too!
Good Luck with a Winner, Amigo!
Best Wishes & a Big Guy-Hug,
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Stevie,
Now that IS funny and what is really funny that even after...
Everybody sniffin butts
Everybody humpin legs
you still chose to catagorize it into contemporary Christian....now that is funny!!
Very entertaining, the only comment I'll make is that the chorus needed a little punch to seperate it from the rest of the song, but always well done and entertaining!!
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LOL  I got nothing else but that, Steve. LOL Scott
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Ooka dooka da give em what they need........
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Hey Stan. Man, that was a long time ago. Not sure what year that was when we paid you a visit.
White Boy Rap...I like that.
Thanks for stopping by for a listen.
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Hey Stevie I like this and needed the laugh today, love it, glyn
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ha ha...clever Hit material...Roger Miller stuff ! were you out of breath after all that ? Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Agree with Cal, that Rodger Miller sound ...
this is very nice ... got a big smile on my face Stevie
cool ... even has some rap elements to it ...
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Funny song Steve. The title made me curious. I'm a big fan of Jimmy Durante. I remember his song "Inka Dinka Doo".
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Stevie,
Now that IS funny and what is really funny that even after...
Everybody sniffin butts
Everybody humpin legs
you still chose to catagorize it into contemporary Christian....now that is funny!!
Very entertaining, the only comment I'll make is that the chorus needed a little punch to seperate it from the rest of the song, but always well done and entertaining!!
Tammy Thanks Tammy. Glad you got a chuckle from it. The Contemorary Christian catagory was a mistake. Was funny though I must admit. Stevie
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The world is missing Roger Miller and now we have Little Stevie. Funny song and interesting presentation.
Rick
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Fun tune and good idea for a song...Dylan can inspire in many ways.
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That's a cute song! Getting any radio play?
Sad but true.....we are indeed becoming a third grade butt sniffin' society while the competition educates their folks more and more.
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LOL I got nothing else but that, Steve. LOL Scott Thanks buddy, Stevie
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Ditto all the Roger Miller stuff, especially the world missing him. I certainly do.
Great song. And it comes in under 2:00.
What program director wouldn't love that.
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Ooka dooka da give em what they need........
LOL Thanks for stopping by for a listen and your nice comment Joice. Stevie
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Ooka dooka da give em what they need........
LOL Thanks for stopping by for a listen and your nice comment Joice. Stevie
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Love it Stevie.... real fun
I think we should try and follow Stan's lead and find a rap name for you...
God Bless Roy
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Hey Stevie I like this and needed the laugh today, love it, glyn Thanks Glyn. Glad it gave you a chuckle. Stevie
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Hi Stevie This is a fun little ditty. If you plan to develop it, I hear some girlie vocals doing some ooka dookas in the background on this. I also feel it could do with just a little something (musical bridge) to break it up a bit. Good fun and nice idea. Nige 
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Thanks Calvin. I keep hearing the Roger Miller comparison lately which is extremely flattering. Stevie
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Agree with Cal, that Rodger Miller sound ...
this is very nice ... got a big smile on my face Stevie
cool ... even has some rap elements to it ... Thanks Dan. I don't understand where rap comes into the picture but it's been mentioned a couple times now so I guess there is some merit there. Glad you got a smile out of it. Thanks again for the listen and comments. Stevie
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Funny song Steve. The title made me curious. I'm a big fan of Jimmy Durante. I remember his song "Inka Dinka Doo". Thanks for stopping by Ben. I well remember that song by Mr. Durante from when I was a kid. My brother and I used to sing parts of it and laugh like crazy. I think it was just the Inka Dinka Doo part cause we didn't know much of the words. Stevie
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The world is missing Roger Miller and now we have Little Stevie. Funny song and interesting presentation.
Rick Wow!! Another Roger Miller comparison. I'm flattered beyond belief. Thanks Rick Stevie
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lol.. man no way I could sing that without tripping over my tongue
http://www.soundclick.com/louistwinn"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps it is because he hears a different drummer. Let him step to the music which he hears, however measured or far away." Thoreau
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Fun tune and good idea for a song...Dylan can inspire in many ways. Thanks "T". I appreciate the listen. Stevie
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That's a cute song! Getting any radio play?
Sad but true.....we are indeed becoming a third grade butt sniffin' society while the competition educates their folks more and more.
Hey Colin. Ain't it the truth. Thanks for stopping by. Stevie
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Hi StevieB,
This is great fun! Ordinarily, I would agree that it needs to be broken up a bit, but it's so short and, after all,
"Ooka dooka da
Dooka dicka dee
I love you, You love me
That's all the words a love song needs"
So, why complicate things with more music and change-ups? Well done!
Ricki
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Ditto all the Roger Miller stuff, especially the world missing him. I certainly do.
Great song. And it comes in under 2:00.
What program director wouldn't love that. Thanks a bunch Mike Stevie
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Love it Stevie.... real fun
I think we should try and follow Stan's lead and find a rap name for you...
God Bless Roy Thanks Roy. You can save the "rap name" though. haha. Stevie
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Hi Stevie This is a fun little ditty. If you plan to develop it, I hear some girlie vocals doing some ooka dookas in the background on this. I also feel it could do with just a little something (musical bridge) to break it up a bit. Good fun and nice idea. Nige Thanks Nige. Good idea about the musical bridge. Stevie
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lol.. man no way I could sing that without tripping over my tongue Thanks Louis. It was hard to get a breath in but it worked out OK I think. Stevie
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Steve...
Man we could sure use more like this...nicely done...reminds me of some of Roger Miller's stuff and if ya want to dig in the wayback hole...a bit of Alan Sherman.."Hello Motha Hello Fatha here I am now at Camp Granada"...good stuff
Larry
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Stevie,
This is so much fun! I like that hook...Ooka Dooka Da, Dooka Dicka Dee..the song flies by and is very entertaining...
Thanks for the laugh!
Kristi
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if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
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Hi StevieB,
This is great fun! Ordinarily, I would agree that it needs to be broken up a bit, but it's so short and, after all,
"Ooka dooka da
Dooka dicka dee
I love you, You love me
That's all the words a love song needs"
So, why complicate things with more music and change-ups? Well done!
Ricki Glad you liked it Ricki. Steve
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Steve...
Man we could sure use more like this...nicely done...reminds me of some of Roger Miller's stuff and if ya want to dig in the wayback hole...a bit of Alan Sherman.."Hello Motha Hello Fatha here I am now at Camp Granada"...good stuff
Larry Thanks Larry. I keep getting the Roger Miller comparison which is really flattering. I remember Alan Sherman well. Used to laugh our heads off at Camp Granada when we were young kids. Stevie
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Stevie,
This is so much fun! I like that hook...Ooka Dooka Da, Dooka Dicka Dee..the song flies by and is very entertaining...
Thanks for the laugh!
Kristi Thanks Kristi. Glad you got a chuckle from it. Stevie
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Well hi there little_elton_j....
So good to have my partner in crime posting again. This is classic fare from you -- social/musical commentary, delivered with tongue firmly implanted in cheek. This section "says it all":
Sex appeal's what matters
Our culture's in the dregs
But which came first
Chicken or the egg
Livin like dogs
Livin like strays
Everybody sniffin butts
Everybody humpin legs
As an aside, I would like to deliver some additional "target audience" info: my 9-year-old son was bopping his head to the music, smiling, and said he hoped it was okay if he liked it better than Mommy's song. Egads, a turncoat under my own roof!
Anyhoo, really enjoyed this morning's romp! Thanks for sharing...
Ciao for now,
Bernice
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Thanks Bernice. Your son has great taste if I say so myself and I do. Thanks for the listen. Actually I've been back for awhile now. See all you've missed, Haha? Where have you been? Thanks again for stopping by.
Stevie
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